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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Author's Response: Definitely a legilimens. LOL Glad you liked it though now I'm nervous that I'll lose my mind-reading abilities. LOL
Lio Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it! :o)
Severus is actually learning to let Harry know his feelings! I'm so proud! Author's Response: LOL Proud of Sev. Hee hee. I love that! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for continuing to read and review! :o)
Anyways, this was such a good chapter. I'm glad Harry was able to control his anger because it would have ruined the moment completely. It was so good to see Harry and Sev interact again, though Sev might be right in thinking that their relationship is back at square one. This has really been more trauma than Harry was prepared to handle and I wouldn't be surprised if their relationship suffered a bit from it. This was such a nice and calm chapter though--it was nice to finally be able to relax about the whole situation (though I'm sure you'll put us back into suspense sooner or later...probably sooner). Well, I suppose Harry really didn't get to relax until the very end though. Poor guy, riding that emotinal roller coaster, otherwise known as adolescence. I just love how we see so many colors of Harry here--the sadness, regret, anger, relief, love...he was overwhelmed and you conveyed that so well with the hyperventilation scene. I'm so glad Sev finally told Harry he loved him. That was wonderful--now he'll have no regrets if something else happens (though I hope it doesn't, I just put down my pitchfork and I'd rather not pick it up again for a little while). And then Harry was all self-conscious about sleeping in bed with Sev at the awkward age of 16. I think Harry should be easier on himself in this respect. I mean, he has never gotten to experience the comforts that other children got and so it makes sense that he'd want them now, especially after he was so close to loosing Sev. I've found my mind shifting more towards Draco and Lucius now that the Sev/Harry situation is taken care of. I really hope that Lucius is smart enough not to go back to the Dark Lord for Draco's sake. I don't know what would happen to Draco if Lucius died, but I don't think it would be good. Most likely, he would take it out on everyone around him, especially Harry once he knows that it was partially Sev's fault. I think Lucius would learn from Sev's mistake though and not take that chance. While I don't necessarily cheer for Lucius, I think he genuinely wants to keep Draco out of this mess and so I don't really want anything bad to happen to him. Speaking of Draco finding out about Harry's dad, I wonder how it will be announced at the school (or if it already has). There has to be a good share of gossip going around right now about where Harry Potter is and what happened (lol, it would be funny if some of it was terribly outlandish too). I wonder just how differently Sev and Harry will be treated by people when they find out (and this affects a lot of people too--it should be very interesting). At least Harry already has his close friends on his side. They'll help him get through this. I can't wait for more! Hugs and chocolate go out to you for writing a heart-warming chapter! -P.G. Author's Response: If Severus hadn't been changed so much by this experience, yes they would be much closer to square one than they will be. Severus is not going to let that happen. :o) Well, yes, I do have some nice suspense up my sleeves. LOL Harry was definitely overwhelmded. Emotional overload with total and complete physical exhaustion. Severus is gonna have his hands full! :o) Glad you liked the big L word. They both needed that. (thanks for putting that pitchfork down!) Don't worry...I think it will slowly get easier for Harry to accept these little things that he missed out one and ince Severus, at this point, really wants to give Harry everything they missed out on. Draco and Lucius definitely have some issues that need to be settled. You'll just have to wait and see. I am cheering a bit for Lucius. yeah the man is evil really but he does love his son. So, he gets a few points, right? LOL Thanks for the hugs and chocolate. So happy you enjoyed the chapter. And that you came over to review! :O)
Thank you, thank you. Give Lucius a scooby snack for me. Author's Response: LOL A scooby snack for Lucius. Hee hee. :oP See, I told you, you just gotta believe! :o) |
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