Lovely last chapter. Thanks for your wonderful story.
This is a very neat and fine story. Ordinary, but you have the ability to make and write it extraordinarily.
Some mistakes i pointed out is you have a little problem with paragraphing. But it does get better to the end. I think you really deserved it to be mentioned at The Economist.
Good luck for your future endeavor in writing!
| Title: Chapter 55: Echoes
| 22 Feb 2014 8:37 am
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| Reviewer: Dimplz (Signed)
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I loved it. I left a longer review at FF net. This story was amazing! I'm so glad I found it!
I will review the whole story in this chapter; I'd only just finished it, three at one go. Lol.
Absolutely wonderful. I love how Severus turned out, along with Harry. The events in between, the tension, the sheer love i can feel=Awesome. I like how you kept Snape strictly in character though. ^^
fantastic. Worth every bit of my time.
| Title: Chapter 55: Echoes
| 28 Dec 2010 7:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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oh my goodness... i love you! this story was amaaaaaaazing :) i can't even describe how much i loved it! i cried twice and that is really surprising because i normally never cry when reading stories! going to read the sequel nowww :) xxxx
Wha........t a story men! I'm running out of adjectives at the mo' describing it....keep it UP!!!!
Yeah, a present! *reaches for the bow!*
I just love this story!!! I've tried to start reading it in the past few months, but was distracted by something. Finally, I am glad to say, I have finished your wonderful story. You are now on the top of my favorite lists! You made me laugh, cry and even get mad! Thank you for your wonderful story. Now, to get back to the real world for a while before I start your sequel!
I recently joined the site, and wanted to let you know that this story was the first one I stumbled across on this site. And I loved every chapter. LOVED IT! You inspired me to join and then to write my own story for this site. Thanks for a great story that has inspired me to write my own! I cannot praise this story enough! Thank you for it! It is wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you liked the story. It was my first fanfic and has given me a lot of happiness. And I'm tickled that I could inspire you to write a story. :o) Thanks so much for the kudos; they are always greatly appreciated.
| Title: Chapter 55: Echoes
| 05 Aug 2009 9:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Well, that was a nice story. Hmm, I think I'll go check out the sequel now.
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