| Title: Chapter 17: A Different Approach
| 15 Jul 2023 6:42 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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It’s one step forward, two steps back with these boys
Hopefully, the lessons will help dissolve their barriers.
I’m interested to see how things turn out with the Malfoys.
| Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus
| 14 Jul 2023 11:06 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Yes, that logic in your author’s note feels spot on. And your delivery on that is superb.
His boy, indeed. I hope he can convince himself and Harry of that soon. Great chapter.
Lovely reveal! The chapter end was poignant.
Retribution felt fitting in this instance. Good for Severus. I’m looking forward to the talk ahead.
| Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot
| 14 Jul 2023 2:14 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is totally gripping.
Oh no, this is all becoming more clear. How awful.
That chapter was so well done. What a gut punch for Snape.
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