| Title: Chapter 5: Trio of Marauders
| 13 Jul 2023 1:40 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love the way you’ve written Severus and Lily together. I’m looking forward to the big reveal!
Great chapter. I like Ginny’s role as a confidante and social shield.
Oh, this isn’t a good plan! And sounds like Dumbledore knew about it.
| Title: Chapter 2: Gringotts' Treasure
| 12 Jul 2023 5:26 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Interesting! I really liked the scene with Remus.
| Title: Chapter 1: Of Mothers and Babies
| 12 Jul 2023 5:16 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love the original start and Snape’s back story
I agree 100% with your note. Harry Potter was created solely for the severitus fanfiction that comes after.
Dear lord I'm crying. This story is so heart wrenching and so, so we'll done. I've been holding my breath since the Death Eater scene, and I'm SO glad that Severus is back. My shoulders sagged in relief at the same time that Harry's did.
Amazing chapter, as always!
I really like the way you keep developing Snape and Harry's bond. It's endearing how tentative they are around each other, because they both care so much more than they're willing to show.
I especially liked this chapter, because it shows how open and willing Harry is to love. He really has such a generous soul, and it balances out Snape's taciturn nature well. I don't think they'd ever be able to restore their relationship without that balance.
It's been nice to see Harry taking brave steps forward, not sure if he'd be rejected, and then Severus offering reassurance in return.
Anyhow! I'm glad that Remus is okay, and very curious about what he and Dumbledore might have been up to. My guess is Horcrux hunting, perhaps? (If there are Horcruxes in this AU, which I don't know if they are.)
I'm very curious if Snape knows the truth about Harry and Voldemort's connection yet (if indeed Harry is a Horcrux in your world) and what Snape plans to do about it if so. I can't imagine that he'd just let Harry sacrifice himself, so I've been trying to figure out what alternatives Snape might concoct.
Wow that was a ramble! Anyway, this story has me utterly engaged, and I'm enjoying being immersed in the world you created. It all feels so real.
Alright, I'm off for more binge reading!
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