I've been binge reading this series like crazy on mobile, which doesn't let you leave comments, so I wanted to stop in real quick and say how much I'm loving this.
You develop Harry and Severus in such interesting ways, and I love the backstory you've created for them. I read this years ago, while it was still in progress, and I'm having a blast re-reading it now that it's complete.
Anyway, thanks for creating such an awesome story, and taking the time and effort to share it with the world!
This is a very neat and fine story. Ordinary, but you have the ability to make and write it extraordinarily.
Some mistakes i pointed out is you have a little problem with paragraphing. But it does get better to the end. I think you really deserved it to be mentioned at The Economist.
Good luck for your future endeavor in writing!
| Title: Chapter 55: Echoes
| 22 Feb 2014 8:37 am
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| Reviewer: Dimplz (Signed)
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I loved it. I left a longer review at FF net. This story was amazing! I'm so glad I found it!
| Title: Chapter 50: Unexpected
| 10 Oct 2013 1:28 am
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| Reviewer: thewandcrafter (Anonymous)
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Dear god, I've been in tears for CHAPTERS.
yeah I love you (bows and worships) many HUGS
It was a good chapter but I hat eyou so much. I balled my eyes out. I need to change my shirt the collar is soaked.
I will review the whole story in this chapter; I'd only just finished it, three at one go. Lol.
Absolutely wonderful. I love how Severus turned out, along with Harry. The events in between, the tension, the sheer love i can feel=Awesome. I like how you kept Snape strictly in character though. ^^
fantastic. Worth every bit of my time.
| Title: Chapter 55: Echoes
| 28 Dec 2010 7:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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oh my goodness... i love you! this story was amaaaaaaazing :) i can't even describe how much i loved it! i cried twice and that is really surprising because i normally never cry when reading stories! going to read the sequel nowww :) xxxx
I find myself exceptionally curious about Hermione and Ron's reactions earlier in the chapter. Oh, and I do not like that chapter ending - seems rather ominous to me. Poor Severus.
Great chapter all around; humor, a little romance, a dash of intrigue, a dose of angst - what more can a girl hope for?
Good chapter - I like how you had Albus have a reaction to the horcrux. Well done!
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