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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Title: Chapter 9: Truth 05 Dec 2007 4:27 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really glad that there wern't any other updates today, and that I didn't have that much homework to put off...because this story is just brilliant! I'm currently trying to come up with my own way to make Severus Harry's father in a fic and have recieved so much inspiration! This story is really a work of art!

    I can't wait for an update! Anyway, you're characterization is great! I love how easy-going and sometimes insecure Severus is around Lily, you can tell that he loves her. And Lily, she's such a headstrong, firey Griffindor! Love her! Harry's reactions are also right on, and I loved him dragging Ginny into the pensive back in chapter...2, 1? Yeah, it was great, whenever it happened!

    I'm really liking the 'mystery' of it all too, with Severus' mother being a right foul git! It adds a certain spark of dread that underlines all their lives. It also works perfectly how you're working back and fourth from then and present time...well, 1996.

    I really can't wait to see what you've got cooking up in the dungeons for these characters! I really do like the increased relationship between Remus and Harry and am looking foward to seeing what you've got planned for Draco (and why he's in such a bad mood)!! Well, until next chapter!

    (Although I must congradulate you for taking over my concious thoughts for today as I foolishly decided to read some fanfiction bofore going to class today and couldn't concentrate on a thing! Well, it's homework time now!) Looking forward to chapter 10...whenever it comes, which is hopefully soon!!

    Author's Response:

    Wow.  What an amazing review.  Thanks so much for the compliments! 

    I have been reading Severus and Harry stories for awhile now and finally got up the nerve to try one of my own.  It is so fun.  If you ever decide to give it a try, think of me for a beta.  I would love to help someone write a story!

    Okay, let's see: I love writing about Severus/Lily.  I'm glad you like the way they are turning out.  And I loved that part too with Ginny going with Harry into the Pensieve.  It was fun.  I adore Ginny/Harry pairings so it was a must.  

    Thanks for the comment about the evil Eileen.  She is dreadful, isn't she?  I'm glad you liked the back and forth between time periods.  That was really to "set the stage" so we won't have more stand-alone Lily/Snape years for awhile (as I don't want to interrupt the flow right now as well) though we'll still see plenty of them, I think.

    Don't worry, Draco is coming up next.  Glad you like Remus and Harry growing closer too.  I think that was seriously lacking in the Canon stories, you know?

    Sorry that you couldn't concentrate but actually, I'm thrilled that you liked my story so much that you were distracted!  :)  The next chapter should be up tomorrow as it is just about finished.  

    Thanks for reviewing and sorry for the ramble, but what can I say, I love reviews! 

      

Title: Chapter 9: Truth 05 Dec 2007 3:27 am
Reviewer: MorwenIsilwen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. This is amazing. I love the way that you are weaving Severus past into the Severus who despises Harry. Draco is also interesting me. Can't wait until you update. ( :

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the nice compliments as well.  I really have enjoyed writing Severus' past with Lily so I'm glad you like it.  And, don't worry, Draco is up next with some more fun in Potions class. Chapter 10 should be up tomorrow as it is almost done!  Hope you keep enjoying!
Title: Chapter 8: Lily's Lie 04 Dec 2007 10:01 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I just read all eight chapters. Very well written and what a cliffhanger! Hope you can post some more soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review.  I think chapter 9 was just validated and up, so you won't have to wait too long to find out more!  Thanks for the compliment and I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.  The next chapter will be in up in the next couple of days.  Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 8: Lily's Lie 04 Dec 2007 10:07 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The suspense is going to kill me!

    Author's Response: Sorry!  :)  Don't worry, the next chapter will be up soon.  Thanks for reveiwing.
Title: Chapter 2: Gringotts' Treasure 04 Dec 2007 4:30 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, great chapter! It was good to see Harry being able to be with his friends at the Burrow, and to begin recovering from Sirius' death. It will always hurt, but being with other people who care for him will help.

    I'm glad you've included Remus here, and let him and Harry have more of a relationship.

    And now Harry and Severus learn the truth!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again!  I'm glad you liked Remus' inclusion; we'll be seeing lots more of Harry and Remus throughout the story.  I love the two of them being closer than they were in the books.  Hope you keep reading and enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 1: Of Mothers and Babies 04 Dec 2007 4:22 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What an intriguing beginning! Lily and Severus are very good together, and Eileen Prince is...well, I won't use the term.

    I can understand Severus' initial feelings of reluctance about the baby even without understanding what Lily's charm is about. It's a dangerous time to bring a baby into the world. But I was glad that he accepted it so well, and was happy.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  I'm glad you like it so far.  It was really fun to write Severus finding out he and Lily having a baby.  I hope you keep enjoying!
Title: Chapter 4: Memories 03 Dec 2007 11:12 pm
Reviewer: bellatrix (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving this! You have a great style of writing and this seems to be moving in an interesting direction! Yay. :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review.  Thank you for the compliment.  I have four new chapter, just waiting to be validated and uploaded.  Hope you keep reading and enjoying!

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