Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 25 Jan 2008 4:14 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    *cringe* poor harry! *hiding a smile*
    it's kinda funny, though. *sheepish*
Title: Chapter 1 08 Dec 2007 5:15 pm
Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent start. I love Snape so far.

    I hope you continue.
Title: Chapter 1 03 Dec 2007 6:17 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good start.
Title: Chapter 1 02 Dec 2007 5:26 pm
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Nov 2007 6:11 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting begining. can't wait to see the reactions to the Dursleys. Thanx for the story.
Title: Chapter 1 28 Nov 2007 5:42 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this. It's a short beginning, but I can't wait to see more chapters. I like how your version of Snape - actions definitely speak louder than words with him. He refuses to do anything with Potter, absolutely refuses, and the next thing you know Snape has the signed document and is caring the boy over his shoulder off to care for him. Seeing Snape's temperament, I doubt that care will be exactly what Harry wants, though it may be precisely what the boy needs.

    I also like the idea that Dumbledore insist Harry has an escort. Sometimes I wondered in the books why someone wasn't ordered to watch Harry every moment as he and trouble found each other eventually.

    And Harry not following Snape - not a good sign this early in your story.

    Can't wait to read more.
Title: Chapter 1 27 Nov 2007 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Amanda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Intriguing first chapter. Can't wait for the next.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 27 Nov 2007 12:26 pm
Reviewer: Sasulia (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it already, can't wait to see what happens next. Very well done.

    Author's Response:

    The next chapter will be out soon. I'm having some trouble with this website but I'm trying to work it out. lol.

Title: Chapter 1 27 Nov 2007 3:48 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I've reviewed on ff.net, but I'm so glad you decided to post here! The thing about this story that will catch readers' attention is the fact that you begin right away with the action of the story, which is a nice touch.

    Author's Response: Thanks again, lol. I hate when stories drag at the beginning.
Title: Chapter 1 27 Nov 2007 1:23 am
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good! Very, very good! Please continue, I'd like to read more!

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