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Reviews For Mine by Blood
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the chapters. I'm afraid that the frequent updates are going to cease soon as I've practically run out of stockpiled chapters but hopefully I'm back on track with this and the time between chapters won't be so long!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, just to throw everyone for a loop, the mafia are about to make their entrance!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm so glad that you like it!
Although I hate to think of Lily spoiling her kids quite so badly... Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the toy shop scene - I had great fun writing that. I know what you mean with Lily, I don't like the idea of her being such a b**** but I'm afraid it's necessary for the story.
Please add more soon xx Great story so far Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm so pleased that you're enjoying it. I'm afraid that you'll have to wait and see whether Alex gets to stay with Severus or if he has to go back to the Potter's. New chapter is now up!
I think the Potters are going to have a nasty surprise waiting for them. I won't ask you if I'm right but will wait for the next chapter to see what happens. Keep up the good work! Dancingkatz Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it. No, James is living in his little delusional world and has no idea what the Cosa Nostra is going to do to him!! I'm glad you really dislike James and Sirius - that was definitely my intention.
Author's Response: Fudge isn't working against Dumbledore, he's helping Snape. He's just trying to do it without getting caught. The Aurors didn't see the abuse because they were looking for very specific memories - I can't say anymore as it might give away later plot details.
Just a note: use 'youngest' when there are three or more, 'younger' when there are two. Author's Response: Thanks for the review - and thanks for pointing that out. I'll bear it in mind!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for my spelling of magick, I'm aware that it is archaic to spell it with the additional "k". However, that is the way that I have always spelt it, I'm quite fond of it and I'm afraid I'm going to continue using it. Sorry! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for my spelling of magick, I'm aware that it is archaic to spell it with the additional "k". However, that is the way that I have always spelt it, I'm quite fond of it and I'm afraid I'm going to continue using it. Sorry!
they can't just take harry now i love this story except for one thing i dont like how u changed harry's name hes not harry if he's alex then hes totally someone else not cool everything else is ace! Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you like it. I'm sorry that you don't like the fact that I've changed Harry's name but it was essential to the story. They're not just going to take Harry, Severus isn't going to give him up without a fight. |
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