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Title: Birthdays 19 Feb 2008 12:44 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I have been reading this one over on ff and just noticed it here. I really enjoy the side of Severus being a good and kind Daddy. And Lucius being a spy was a shock.

    Thank you for the story

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Lucius being a spy was a shock....is that a good shock or a bad shock?
Title: Custody 17 Feb 2008 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NICE JOB!!!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Custody 11 Dec 2007 11:56 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Custody 11 Dec 2007 9:41 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    We certainly do have a growing cast of characters. Your Arabella is certainly different from what we usually see. The interaction between Severus and Harry also is sweet, but I'm afraid I don't quite understand why a 23 yo man thinks he will never be able to have his own children. You might also work a little on giving each of your characters a more distinct "voice" in the conversations. The story is flowing well, and I'll be especially interested in seeing how things go when Harry gets to Hogwarts. Could you give us some idea of how long you envision this story to be? Not that it really makes much difference, but enquiring minds want to know. ;-)

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review and your suggestions...I will definitely bear them in mind. As for Severus and why he thinks he won't be able to have children of his own.....he's marked as a Death Eater and so, even though Voldemort has supposedly been destroyed, bearing the Dark Mark still carries a stigma with it. As such, within the United Kingdom the only people who wouldn't regard it as a turn-off would be other Death-Eater's and Severus is obviously a spy. There is also the fact that he is at Hogwarts almost permanently and doesn't spend much time in Italy. Does that make sense at all? I honestly have no idea how long this story is going to be...I have it planned out up until chapter 16 I think and then a couple of chapters for when Harry/Alex is 11. Several readers elsewhere want to see me carry it on through the Hogwarts years but I have yet to make a decision on that.
Title: Custody 11 Dec 2007 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Potions Conference 10 Dec 2007 7:17 pm
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent! I love it

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad  lol!
Title: Potions Conference 10 Dec 2007 2:14 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    How sweet! can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you! There is now more....and another two chapters on the way!
Title: Potions Conference 09 Dec 2007 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a melt your heart kinda story!

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much....glad you think so!
Title: Villa Principessa 03 Dec 2007 5:54 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Villa Principessa 30 Nov 2007 10:58 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the background you are giving Severus here. I'm glad he has loving grandparents.

    It's a little nitpick, but I don't think the word "old" fits in this sentence: "He quickly shucked off the heavy black clothing he wore at Hogwarts in keeping with his role as the “greasy old bat of the dungeons”" As you say in a later paragraph, Severus is only 23, so I don't think the students would call him "old". Maybe just "greasy bat"

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the background.....there is a rather large family for Severus here - I don't know I just like the idea of him having a support network and just seriously evil parents. Plus I got rather bored when revising for finals and so created a whole family tree for him stretching back five generations and you will meet quite a few of them! Thanks for pointing out the nitpick - I completely see what you mean and don't know how me and my beta missed it...it will get changed!

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