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Reviews For Mine by Blood
Thank you for the story Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Lucius being a spy was a shock....is that a good shock or a bad shock?
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Author's Response: Thanks for your review and your suggestions...I will definitely bear them in mind. As for Severus and why he thinks he won't be able to have children of his own.....he's marked as a Death Eater and so, even though Voldemort has supposedly been destroyed, bearing the Dark Mark still carries a stigma with it. As such, within the United Kingdom the only people who wouldn't regard it as a turn-off would be other Death-Eater's and Severus is obviously a spy. There is also the fact that he is at Hogwarts almost permanently and doesn't spend much time in Italy. Does that make sense at all? I honestly have no idea how long this story is going to be...I have it planned out up until chapter 16 I think and then a couple of chapters for when Harry/Alex is 11. Several readers elsewhere want to see me carry it on through the Hogwarts years but I have yet to make a decision on that.
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Author's Response: Thank you! There is now more....and another two chapters on the way!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much....glad you think so!
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It's a little nitpick, but I don't think the word "old" fits in this sentence: "He quickly shucked off the heavy black clothing he wore at Hogwarts in keeping with his role as the “greasy old bat of the dungeons”" As you say in a later paragraph, Severus is only 23, so I don't think the students would call him "old". Maybe just "greasy bat" Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the background.....there is a rather large family for Severus here - I don't know I just like the idea of him having a support network and just seriously evil parents. Plus I got rather bored when revising for finals and so created a whole family tree for him stretching back five generations and you will meet quite a few of them! Thanks for pointing out the nitpick - I completely see what you mean and don't know how me and my beta missed it...it will get changed! |
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