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Title: Villa Principessa 27 Nov 2007 11:39 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    A very interesting beginning, and quite unique! I'm looking forward to see how the story will develop :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think it's unique....I do worry that it can seem rather like the many other Severus/Harry fics that are out there - many of which are much better that I could ever hope to write!
Title: Villa Principessa 27 Nov 2007 10:20 pm
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, this is certainly an unseen side of Snape. I like, and I don't usually like Nice!Snape stories, but this one was well done, the writing was intriguing, and the idea seems like it could turn into a cool one.

    One thing, really: For an English person like Sev, or even an Italian learning English, the terms for grandmother and grandfather are far more likely to be Grandmum, nan, or grandmother, and granddad or grandfather. Grandma and Grandpa are really an American thing.

    Besides that I'm impressed. I would like to see more of this with the next update!

    Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review - I'm certainly amazed by the compliments but very grateful so thank you! I did think about calling them grandma and grandpa but for some reason (and I don't know why) but it seemed to fit whilst I was writing it and so I decided to leave it at was. Besides, I'm English and I always called one set of grandparents grandma and grandpa and the other nana and grandad just to differentiate...just personal preference I guess!

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