| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Dec 2007 3:10 pm
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| Reviewer: GalynSolo (Anonymous)
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Hmm, interesting. Curious to read more. Good luck!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 02 Dec 2007 5:41 pm
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| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 1
| 01 Dec 2007 2:03 am
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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This is great - I loved the idea, though having a raccoon in the middle of London is pretty random!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 29 Nov 2007 8:56 am
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Nice, I loved the starting chapter. I hope you write more because it's got potential.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 29 Nov 2007 5:04 am
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| Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous)
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I love your story so far and hope you write more. You’ve got a lot of potential as a writer. However, your story contains quite a few errors. You may want to read over what you write to correct the obvious errors, and get a beta reader to help you with your punctuation.
Keep writing,
Becky
| Title: Chapter 1
| 29 Nov 2007 3:54 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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Interesting story, I hope it continues. Snape and Harry just naturally rub each other the wrong way. It'll be interesting for Harry and Snape to appreciate each other's contributions.
Not a bad start. You might want to go back and edit this one more time because there are several small noticable errors. Harry's name is not capitalized along with the word "I" in several parts of this chapter. Other than that, this seems like it will be the start to an intersting story.
Author's Response: Yeah, I noticed a few errors after i posted it. I'm just not sure about how to edit it so I was waiting to make sure I didn't mess anything up.
Great beginning! I hope Harry's not too badly hurt, and that Dumbledore at least won't leave him with the Dursleys.
Interesting beginning. I can't wait to see where it goes. I love your Snape he see very in character and unlike a lot of stories were he is completely ignorant of the muggle world, you have him as being aware, perhaps just not up to date on it. Wonderful. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Interesting first chapter! I'm looking forward to the next, hope to see some interactions between Harry and Snape :-)
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