Luna is so fantastic! I suppose a little difficult to live with, though. Great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 2 - Another Work Day
| 01 Dec 2007 10:53 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I forgot to mention that Harry probably knows how to cook. Didn't he cook for his relatives all the time?
| Title: Chapter 2 - Another Work Day
| 01 Dec 2007 6:09 am
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OH! The Malfoys! I must admit that I was not expecting that! I was expecting Snape at some point, but not the Malfoy family. They did work for Voldemort during the war, but Harry knows that hey weren't that active in it. Wow, I can't wait to read and see how Harry will try and defend them. He will, won't he? I hope so.
I really like how Harry is offering to take in all his friends. :) I liked Luna. Neville was great. I think i need more descriptions of him physically though. He changed in book 7, and I can't really remember how, or what he would look like now.
Fantastic story! There are a couple of typos you might want to go back and fix, or get someone to list for you. :)
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