| Title: Chapter 4 - Shock
| 01 Dec 2007 5:46 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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Wow! You write really well, but the amount of cruelty that Harry's friends are showing in this story really disturbs me. I can understand Neville being angry, but not vicious. Hermione might have cooked and Ron might have supplied a tent, but that shouldn't mean they have control over HARRY'S house. I know Harry is clinically depressed, but, his friends are vicious and they seem to have more say in decisions that he does. I'm not flaming...as I said, you write well, but I don't think this story is for me.
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