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Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 10:41 pm
Reviewer: AlbusD1986 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying reading this. More please???
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 10:40 pm
Reviewer: lily-leigh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story so far.
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 9:32 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this first chapter. Please don't make me wait too long for the next one as I am curious what will happen next.

    Author's Response: Not too long to go, I promise! thanks for reading and reviewing! 
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start! I am certainly very curious to know where this will go. Hope you can update soon!

    Author's Response: I should be updating vvv soon! thanks for reading and reviewing! 
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 9:10 pm
Reviewer: kehlana_miyu (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, that was one of the best introduction chapter to Slytherin Harry I've read and I've read many!:) I especially liked your Draco's POV, he was observant, funny and so stubbornly prejudiced:) I'm looking forward to your turn on other characters and I really hope you'll post soon!

    Author's Response: Ooh, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I can't wait to finish writing the next chapter! thanks for reading and reviewing :-)
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 8:26 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice start. It is always interesting to see the action from Draco's point of view.

    Could you tell where to find the story, Of Ordinary Wizards, you mentioned?

    Author's Response:

    http://www.fanfiction.net/u/857616/Delaine

     is the author's page.

     It was the last chapter that got me thinking really... 

     thanks for reviewing! :-) 

Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 5:07 pm
Reviewer: gowvan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start!

    Author's Response: thanks!
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 3:17 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning! First time I've ever seen Harry's sorting from Draco's POV! Excellent work!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, next chapter is from Ron's POV which is proving interesting to write LOL. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 10:08 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great beginning! You've done a fantastic job of getting inside Draco's head, and I enjoyed reading his thoughts about Harry.

    I loved how Harry is determined to be friends with both Draco and Ron, and even more, that they will become friends with each other. Be interesting to see what happens now!

    Author's Response: That's what I'm hoping for with Draco and Ron, it would be nice if I manage to pull it off... fingers' crossed. Writing Draco was a bit harder than I thought it would be so I'm glad you liked it, not long until a chapter from Snape's POV which is always fun to write! thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. 03 Dec 2007 7:56 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific start!! You've really captured Draco's voice here, and I'm looking forward to the perspective of other characters!!

    One question though, will you repeat perspectives? For instance, will you use Draco to narrate chapter 10 as well, or is it strictly one chapter per character? OK, two questions - LOL!! Will Harry get to narrate a chapter himself or is this story strictly from the perspectives of the other characters in the story?

    The glimpse of fear on Severus' face has intrigued me, and I can't wait to find out what he's concerned about!! Your Harry is adorable, and your Ron is surprisingly unannoying!! *grins* Let's see if Ron can keep his promise to stay Harry's friend in spite of his house!!
    Scarlett

    Author's Response:

    Hehe, thank you. I always like your reviews.

    Draco will narrate at least another chapter, I won't say which, but if you think back to HP and the Philosopher's Stone, there's a chapter which is going to be lots of fun to write from Draco's POV.  :-P 

    Secondly, Harry has a turn soon. The next chapter is by Ron, and then Snape, but Harry will feature very soon. 

    Thanks for reading and reviewing! 


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