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Reviews For The Last Gift
Author's Response: thank you very much!
By the way, is there a way to relieve Snape's fears about Harry leaving him because the boy is not of his blood? That young man (Yes I just referred to Snape as young, American term of speech) needs a little more confidence in his abilities. Hopefully Harry will learn that his father is human in a not horribly painful way. By the way does Lily, James and Sirus know Harry was supposed to be in Slytherin and that Snape can use Gryffindor's sword? Because if they don't, a comment made by both Malfoy and Sirus would be wrong. Great job! Write more! Translate more!! I look forward to reading more!! Author's Response: ahh well, there would be ways, yes, but I love the angst so much! :-) if my (borrowed) characters were real, they would probably resent me very much! I don't think that the ghosts know about Harry and Slytherin, but they certainly know now about Snape and the sword! That certainly gave them a good laugh! next chapter in a few minutes ;-)
When I read the story summary, you grabbed my attention right away, and I have to tell you that I've spent hours reading this practically non-stop since I found it last Friday, to the detriment of my housekeeping! You made the Snape adopting Harry into a believable situation, and I dearly wish that Rowling's Snape had been closer to yours. You've done a great job on characterization of all the characters, and I especially love how artfully you have kept the plot going, giving us teasers of conversation between characters, but not letting us know what it was really about until later when you give us a new plot twist. Well done! Very well done! (And a huge "well done" to your translator too!) Author's Response: thank you very much! Don't worry, housekeeping is overrated! I'm glad you like the story, I really have to go back to writing it, it's been a few months now, time is running so quickly... anyway, my wonderful translator was faster than me and a new chapter will be up in a few minutes:
Author's Response: thank you! I like those characters that are in the books but not too well known, it's a great opportunity to use them... I think a lot could be said about Regulus, he would probably deserve a story of his own! |
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