This was a fascinating opening chapter. I know this story is unfinished, but I’m reading with the hope that more will be translated one day!
| Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby
| 15 Sep 2009 11:48 pm
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| Reviewer: unknown reader (Anonymous)
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Oooo! That's interesting. What could it mean? Guess I gotta read more! lol
| Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby
| 28 Feb 2008 5:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Oooh! That first chapter was kinda spooky! Lol, Great job!
Author's Response: thank you, I am really bad with first chapters, but I hope this improves later ! I never know how to start a story properly !*sigh*
| Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby
| 11 Feb 2008 3:05 am
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| Reviewer: honore (Anonymous)
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French or English,I like your idea. I like the direction you've taken the story so far. Looking forward to more, Thanks
Author's Response: thank you, I hope you will like the next chapters ;-)
That was such a sweet beginning. I can't wait to read more. Harry is so very loved, but he can't see it!
| Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby
| 17 Dec 2007 1:40 am
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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That was lovely! I'm very impressed with your English, or else with your beta-readers hard work, lol. It's much, much better than anything I could do in a foreign language!
It's a great beginning, too. I love how Lily, James, and Sirius came to Harry, how they want so much to help and comfort him. I'm very curious about what this gift is.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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