| Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving
| 04 Aug 2023 12:18 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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A riveting chapter! I liked the happy calm before the storm.
The Story looks awesome so far i cant wait to keep reading.
Author's Response: thank you :-)
| Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving
| 16 Sep 2009 12:09 am
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| Reviewer: unkown reader (Anonymous)
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Ooo! Kitty! Yeah kitties!
Author's Response: meow!
| Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving
| 16 Feb 2009 4:11 am
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| Reviewer: Mebbles (Anonymous)
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Overall, I like the plot, and the grammar is good. However, there are way too many exclamation marks. You could do with about a quarter of the ones you have now. That is the only annoying thing, and otherwise, I really enjoy reading this.
Author's Response: Ah yes, actually I think I was a bit overenthousiastic to start with, but that gets better afterward ;-)
| Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving
| 05 Mar 2008 6:51 pm
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| Reviewer: amanda (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed your story pleas keep reating
Author's Response: thank you !
| Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving
| 28 Feb 2008 5:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Cat amimagus Harry? Cool! So Harry escaped right before the DE showed up. Will Alubus & The Order think that Harry is dead? Where will Harry go? Great chapter!
Scorpia
Author's Response: yep, animagus Harry, I know this is quite common, but I hope the story is not too classical though !
Oh no! Don't leave us here! Who's the cat? Why are the death eaters there? What's going on? Get him out of there!!!
Author's Response: My betas are working on it, the cat is waiting eating some fish on a jumper ;-)
Interesting start. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanx for the well written story.
Author's Response: Thank you, all the credit goes to my betas really, my English translation was awful !
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