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Reviews For The Last Gift
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 04 Aug 2023 12:32 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness, that happened! Amazing chapter end
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 23 Oct 2009 11:32 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    I began reading "Shadow" in French on fanfiction.net last year and fell in love with it! (I'm up to chapter 25 in French.) it's great to see an English translation on P&S so that even more readers can enjoy the story! I especially love the characterization of the cat, and the way you have of putting your audience into his mind, seeing the world from Shadow's point of view! (Also, I hope you don't mind, but your writing was the inspiration for my pen name: I was reading about Snape speaking to the cat "en sa voix shadowienne", and I realized I'd found my pen name! Merci!)

    Author's Response: Hey, thank you very much! I am very flattered to have inspired your pen name! Shadow sends you a lot of purrs :-)
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 16 Sep 2009 2:09 am
Reviewer: unknown reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very good
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 04 Mar 2008 9:34 am
Reviewer: beckettsgirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it!!! Please translate more!!! I would offer to help, but my french truly stinks.

    Author's Response: thank you, we're working on it ( well, Cynan and RaeWhit are ;-p )
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 04 Mar 2008 8:24 am
Reviewer: SnowStalker (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh!!! You can't leave it there! *sniffs* It's not fair! This is such a wonderful fic. Your characterization of Severus is wonderfully done, and I find it interesting that Shadow has no real memories of being Harry...I wonder...will Harry remember being Shadow? Also, your general plot is quite original (at least, I haven't come across one like it, and while I haven't read every fanfic out there, I have read a great many of them...I noticed that you've only discovered the fandom recently, so if you like, I could recommend some...by the way, "A Year Like None Other" is one of my favorites, too.) I also understand that you have many more chapters written in French. While I am certainly can't speak, read, or write French, I can correct your English, if that's where the translation problem is. I can't translate, but I can make sure it has good English grammar, even from a direct translation (I hope that made sense...). Anyway, I'm willing to help in whatever way I can. I literally can't wait for the next chapter to be out! Keep it up, you're doing so well!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, I am in fact very lucky to have both a translator and a professional beta who actually do all the work for me, I'm afraid my translation skills were lost after a few chapters : it is not so funny to translate into another language than your own ! But thank you for the offer, I much appreciate ;-)
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 01 Mar 2008 5:04 am
Reviewer: Ramos (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this is really, really good. Quite enjoying it.

    Author's Response: thank you, I enjoy writing it too ;-)
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 29 Feb 2008 6:34 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh how you could you do this....slowly immerse us into the story...deeper and deeper....totally interested in it to be left with this ending. I need to read more! Great update.

    Author's Response: thank you ! I hate cliffs in others' story, but I guess that this is a reflexe when you writte: be mean to the reader ;-)
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 29 Feb 2008 4:12 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story so far. What an interesting way for Harry to get a chance to heal and recover from Sirius' death. I can't wait to see how Snape reacts to his new knowledge.

    Author's Response: A real chance for a new life, yes. But things are never easy anyway...
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 29 Feb 2008 5:58 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG I can't wait until the next chapter! This story is very good.

    Author's Response: thank you ;-)
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 29 Feb 2008 4:18 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks so much for the update. This is a great storyline so far. I can't wait to see what happens now that Snape knows who his cat is!

    Congratultions to your translators too -- they are doing a fantastic job.

    Author's Response: Oh yes I can tell you they are really good, I can't say how grateful I am ! Big hug to them ;-)

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