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Title: Chapter 8- What Now ? 18 Apr 2008 11:25 pm
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a fantastic story. I reread all of the chapters before reading this new one and I am again amazed at your plot. You've made everything believable -- Harry going to Severus because of Hermione's bracelet, his powers giving him the animagus power unbeknownst to him, etc. I like your portrayal of Snape. It seems very much in character, yet you are already giving him reasons to change his attitude about Harry.

    Great story!! Many thanks to your translator and beta too.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much, there is actually one more reason about Harry landing on Snape's doorstep- but that will come soon ;-)

    I hope you'll like the next chapter, I have released chapter 29 a few days ago, it is quite awkward to get back in time in the first chapter, but I really like it actually !

     I'll tell my translator and beta, thanks ;-)

Title: Chapter 8- What Now ? 18 Apr 2008 9:23 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    When I saw your update I got so excieted! Clicked on your story in a blink.

    I actually found that this chapter was a very good one with it's informative-ness. The characters really needed to ponder what's happened and many more mysteries and questions have appeared for us readers. I'm very worried about poor Harry, his condition sounds horrible! I am extreamly anxious to read your next chapter; I've read many 'Snape meets the Dursleys' scinarios, but since you keep everyone so wonderfully in character I have a feeling it will be one of the best ones ^^. Beautiful work Keina, keep it up and post again soon! Give my thanks to Cyllan and RaeWhit as well!

    Author's Response:

    I really hope that you'll like the next one, I was so nervous at the time I wrotte it, it's such a stonemark in those kind of fics ! I don't know if I succeded well, but the French readers were actually delighted with one particular sentence- I hope you'll find soon ;-)

    Thanks for reviewing ;-)

Title: Chapter 8- What Now ? 18 Apr 2008 8:36 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great ending to this chapter! The wounds on Harry are scary. What else could he be hiding. I hope that they can do more for him than just clean them with water! What about Muggle healing things?

    Snape's thoughts were great to read. Dumbledore was in character and interesting to read too. It will be terrible for Snape to have to see Petunia. Thanks for the update! It was good and your beta's did a wonderful job!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, RaeWhit is really doing a wonderful job with this story, and I'm sooo glad that Cyllan could take the translation !

     Snape will actually be able to care for those wounds as soon as he will understand what they are; but the main problem will be the emotional wounds here

    As for meeting Petunia... yes, that will actually be a dreadful moment for him in more than a way. He won't be too delighted with seeing Vernon either, actually !

     

    Thank you for your review- I received the notification, it works ;-)


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