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Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 04 Aug 2023 1:48 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The dark lord’s words were chilling. Lovely and hopeful chapter end though.
Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 18 Nov 2016 8:13 pm
Reviewer: rowenasheir (Signed) [Report This]
    There is no difference between AD and TMR! The end justifies the means, t all costs and... neither would ever admit that they maybe wrong.
Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 13 Jun 2010 9:05 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    I love love love this story. Keep writing, and many thanks to your translators. I read a chapter before bed and it calms me. Thank you.

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 18 Aug 2009 8:59 pm
Reviewer: A (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "the Order’s lethargy" inaction would be a better word choice.

    "Dark Lord's{del sp} " - I think some editing terms got left in here.

    Fantastic!
Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 04 Sep 2008 12:02 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. Can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: thank you, it shouldn't be long ;-)
Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 04 Aug 2008 8:32 pm
Reviewer: tish tosh (Signed) [Report This]
    fantastic

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 04 Aug 2008 2:05 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I really liked this one. I loved how Harry scratched things up around the house too. I hope to read the next update again soon!

    Author's Response: just like a real cat would do ;-)
Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 03 Aug 2008 5:11 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm extremely happy you updated, I've been waiting anxiously for this chapter for some time.

    Poor Snape, Voldemort didn't let up with him and the poor man is in bad shape. I'm glad that Dumbledore and the Order were willing to try and help him, but It's good they didn't rush out since it would have been in vain (not to mention he would have been exposed as a spy).

    Good thing Dumbledore allowed Harry/Shadow to come! Poor Harry has really been worried, it's good he got to see Sev, and I’m sure Sev will be relieved to see him as well. Thankfully, it seems he is going to be alright.

    Hope to see the next chapter soon! And I'm happy to hear that there are plenty more chapters ahead ^_^.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you ! it might be some time before next update, but it will come eventually :-)

    Yes, poor Snape... and he won't be safe until quite some time, believe me ! Dumbledore is always calculating his options, and yes, this one was a good one ;-)

    But at least, now Harry and Severus have each other !

Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 02 Aug 2008 11:02 pm
Reviewer: Wooster (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really fond of this story. It's super cute and very well written.

    I'm mostly reviewing as a response to your request for more translators. I'm an English major and want to be a book editor, so my grammar is very good. I also have five years of French under my belt. I am by no means fluent, but I can read French fairly well and have also read the first Harry Potter book in French.

    Author's Response:

    ohh I think you're going to be my new best friend !

    Thank you, I will mail you at once ;-)

Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 02 Aug 2008 10:36 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Keep it up!

    Author's Response: I will ;-)

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