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Reviews For The Last Gift
Author's Response: thank you :-)
"Dark Lord's{del sp} " - I think some editing terms got left in here. Fantastic!
Author's Response: thank you, it shouldn't be long ;-)
Author's Response: thank you :-)
Author's Response: just like a real cat would do ;-)
Poor Snape, Voldemort didn't let up with him and the poor man is in bad shape. I'm glad that Dumbledore and the Order were willing to try and help him, but It's good they didn't rush out since it would have been in vain (not to mention he would have been exposed as a spy). Good thing Dumbledore allowed Harry/Shadow to come! Poor Harry has really been worried, it's good he got to see Sev, and I’m sure Sev will be relieved to see him as well. Thankfully, it seems he is going to be alright. Hope to see the next chapter soon! And I'm happy to hear that there are plenty more chapters ahead ^_^. Author's Response: Thank you ! it might be some time before next update, but it will come eventually :-) Yes, poor Snape... and he won't be safe until quite some time, believe me ! Dumbledore is always calculating his options, and yes, this one was a good one ;-) But at least, now Harry and Severus have each other !
I'm mostly reviewing as a response to your request for more translators. I'm an English major and want to be a book editor, so my grammar is very good. I also have five years of French under my belt. I am by no means fluent, but I can read French fairly well and have also read the first Harry Potter book in French. Author's Response: ohh I think you're going to be my new best friend ! Thank you, I will mail you at once ;-)
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