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Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 05 Aug 2023 1:11 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 14 Jun 2010 7:19 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Once again, I love this story and am so glad I have many more chapters to look forward to :-)
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 06 Nov 2009 11:46 pm
Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent explanation of the firth chapter intervention of the deaths and the assignment of Snape as a guardian.

    Author's Response: thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 18 Aug 2009 9:46 pm
Reviewer: A (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "some days, his job as potions master seemed to have a [] useful yet terribly realisctic side to it..." - this is awkward. realistic was misspelled - but not the word. perhaps

    'some days, his job as potions master seemed all too necessary to his continued existence.'

    :) Much better than many stories by native speakers. :)

    Author's Response: oops, thank you, I'll ask my translator about this!
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 01 Nov 2008 8:32 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy Birthday, Shadow! As always, I enjoyed this chapter very much, particularly when Sev got all super-protective when they arrived at Grimmauld Place. I look forward to the next chapter very much.

    As thanks I'm sending you virtual sweets and Shadow virtual catnip. Enjoy!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot, Shadow says he's happy with the catnip and Snape says he's got a bad breath now- well honestly he already had before ;-)
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 17 Sep 2008 5:24 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad Sev is better, it sure was funny when the Order freaked out when he returned to Grimmauld Place, lol. I'm also glad that Harry got to see his friends, they definitely will have a lot to talk about once school starts up again.

    Seems Dumbledore has cracked the mystery of the bracelet! And it looks like Sev’s got a new determination to watch over Harry/Shadow.

    Hope to read the next chapter soon! And congrats on making the long length in French! Looks like there will be lots more chapters to read once it's translated (yea!) :D

    Author's Response:

    Thank you ! There will be a lot more discoveries around this, but yes, it's done for the bracelet ;-) 

    Unfortunately, a lot will still happen before Harry and his friends can see each other again...

    But I think that at least the half of next chapter is translated so it shouldn't be long until next update ;-)

Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 09 Sep 2008 10:12 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, I enjoyed the synopsis of what was going on with the magic the night Harry escaped. I think we have Severus convinced now. Very enjoyable chapter.

    Author's Response: thank you ! to build a real strong relationship will take time, but yes, the foudations are there ;-)
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 08 Sep 2008 4:44 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, I've just read your last two chapters - excellent exploration of Severus and Dumbledore! I like how you kept Moody from agreeing for the rescue plan. And Ron was great - though I can't help but wonder how they will react to Snape being 'nice'. For some reason you have {del sp} in the previous chapter and {sp} in this one?

    Author's Response: Thank you ! Hum, there will actually be a few more twist before they'll be able to really react to that... and rough twist, trust me ! I'm really sorry for the strange notes, they are from my beta, I missed them in my final version :-s
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 08 Sep 2008 7:36 am
Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. I love the explanation of how Harry gained his Animagus ability. The interactions between Snape and Harry in cat form were so endearing. I can't wait to see more.

    Author's Response: thanks ! Even Snape can't resist a stupid kitten with strange maneers ;-)

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