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Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 05 Aug 2023 1:29 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely lovely chapter end. It was perfect.
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 16 Jun 2010 6:00 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely, lovely. I love hurt-comfort fics, and I love the reluctant and confused relationship developing between Harry and Snape.
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 17 Jul 2009 10:57 pm
Reviewer: Trillian (Signed) [Report This]
    Just to make something clear to you: in England, black cats are GOOD luck. It's white cats that are bad luck.

    Author's Response: yes, I know. But this story was originally written in French, and in France, black cats are bad luck
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 22 Oct 2008 12:33 am
Reviewer: Onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thought Harry Potter's hair was black.

    Author's Response: yes, a little problem of translation actually. Brown/black hair both translate with "brun" in French.
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 21 Oct 2008 1:22 am
Reviewer: Ripuku (Signed) [Report This]
    I know some french...What are you looking to translate?

    Author's Response: This story actually ;-)
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 20 Oct 2008 3:11 pm
Reviewer: aloveablegimp (Signed) [Report This]
    Hello! I just found your story and it's fantastical! I love it so very much and it's just so cute! I hope that you update very soon. If you would like another Beta someone to go over the chapter and correct the english (there were a few mistakes still in spelling for example) I would be more than honored to do so. Let me know. Don't get me wrong though your story is just awesome and many other positive adjectives. ;)

    Love and a Peace,
    Kates

    Author's Response: Thank you very much ! I might just take on your offer, my, translation is quite a hard process at time and I think that my beta was more focused on the meaning, that might relieve her if she knew someone was checking for spelling ;-)
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 16 Oct 2008 11:11 pm
Reviewer: HeliosTor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thankyou very much for posting this, it's brilliant. A lovely idea, thanks for the translation!

    Author's Response: Thank you, my translators are a wonderful team indeed ;-)
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww...I love it
    "I would not want a cat of any other colour,"
    sooo sweet :D how i wish I'd kept up French so that I could read ahead. Keep it up

    Author's Response: I'm about to post chapter 37 in French, there's still a long way ahead ;-)
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 10:16 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter (as always) I'm really glad you updated this story :)

    It really sucks that those horrible Dursleys are tying to get a hold of Harry. Hasn't he suffered enough? I pray that Dumbledore will find a solution.

    Poor Harry, talk about a horrible nightmare! I'm glad Sev could help him, Harry really doesn't deserve to have to deal with all that guilt. I thought the ending of the chapter was really sweet, I liked Sev's comment: "I would not want a cat of any other colour," It made me smile :)

    I'll keep looking for more chapters!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you ! I thought it was a bit of a bad chapter, but then as I am more advanced in French ( obviously ) the old chapters seems odd now ! I'm glad people seem to like it ;-)

    nightmares are going to be a crucial point in the future for Harry, and as for suffering... well let's just say that there will be more obstacles in the way before they can finally get some rest ;-)

Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 9:24 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter and i'm glad harry/shadow is safe with his protector severus at snape manor

    i'm useless at french

    Author's Response: thank you ! as for safe... when has Harry ever be safe ? ;-)

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