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Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 05 Aug 2023 3:50 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    How could Dumbledore let that happen!! Ah, what a terrible cliffhanger!
Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 19 Nov 2008 4:19 am
Reviewer: Slythami (Signed) [Report This]
    You are sooo right ... bad bad BAD cliffie. Does Voldie know that Snape is a spy and sacrificed killing him at that point in time so that he could kill Harry, call Snape and THEN kill Snape? oOo ... that would make him smart! AHhh theories! Update soon!

    Author's Response: lol I love theories ! You'll find out soon though, I promise ;-)
Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 17 Nov 2008 2:42 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Gasp! That truly was a wondeful cliffhanger! Poor Harry - first Sev being mean to him and then being kidnapped - definitely not one of his best days. Serves Sev right though for being so cold - he's so clueless sometimes! I hope you write more soon, good luck with the next chapter.

    Author's Response: That was really a 'bad luck, bad choices' day ! A lot of people here have been taking the wron option, but ah... wait and see ;-)
Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 17 Nov 2008 2:16 am
Reviewer: Leilia Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my Stars!!!
    Malfoy just stole Severus's cat!! I actually feel just a little bit sorry for Malfoy when Sev catches up with him.
    Nobody messes with Severus's cat. ;-}

    I love the story, very good job.
    I can't wait to find out what happens with Sev and Harry. I am wondering if this may turn into a Severus adopts Harry fic...
    However it turns out, I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

    Leilia

    Author's Response:

    ahah, yes, the cat's been stolen ! Bad day for the kitty...

    I hope you'll like the next chapter ;-)

Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 16 Nov 2008 7:25 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! Poor Harry, he must feel absolutely horrible. I could almost hear his heart breaking, my eyes teared up during those last scenes at the Manor.

    Darn it! Why did stupid Lucius have to go and rear his ugly head?! I'll be crossing my fingers for Harry, that he'll somehow get out of this horrible mess. That, and that things can be managed with him and Snape.

    Absolutely brilliant chapter, it made my heart clench. Here’s hoping to read another chapter soon! Please post again when you can :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, Harry feels really, really bad. But it's nothing in comparison to what is going to happen.

    Wait until next chapter ;-)

Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 16 Nov 2008 3:59 am
Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh, that was so, so, so, so evil! *sniff* Bet Snape regrets that one. Poor Harry. Part of me is wondering if he even really cares what happens to him anymore. I hope you update really, really, really soon! ^__^ Happy writing!

    Author's Response: oh yes, Snape does regret it now ! he will regret it all the more in a short time !
Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 16 Nov 2008 2:33 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: thank you ;-)
Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 16 Nov 2008 2:17 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that really was an evil cliffie! I feel so badly for Harry, who is so hurt and betrayed, but still blames himself for Severus' behavior.

    I feel a bit sorry for Severus, too, because he does think he's doing the right thing to protect Harry...but he's just gotten it all completely wrong.

    And now Voldemort has Harry. That certainly bodes no good. Oh, I hope he won't suffer...the poor kid has been through enough already, and I hope Severus, or someone, will be able to get him out of there. Yes, and then Severus' true loyalties will be revealed and he won't have to spy anymore. I hope.

    Please, please hurry with the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Evil cliffies indeed. As for betrayal and guilt, it will be the heart of the matter for a while now... poor Harry !

    And yes, poor Snape, because he wanted to much to do his best ! just like Dumbledore...

    Oh well as for suffering, I can only tell you that the warning 'torture' is there for the chapters to come, though it won't be so much physical... well yes that too, but not the most important. but well, that's not a drama, so...

     

Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 15 Nov 2008 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Arghh! How COULD YOU! :o

    OMG! Why didn't you tell me that I would need a box of tissues for this chappie? My eyes are moist, and my heart is heavy. Darned, I really hope things change. I want Harry and Snape together. Sniff sniff! :(

    Author's Response:
Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust 15 Nov 2008 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Drayconette (Signed) [Report This]
    AAAHH! What?! Tho... i s'pose i suspected that. I'm excited- things get interesting when Harry is in trouble like that- he gets to show his stuff. Not that the rest of the story hasn't been interesting... but I like the action more. So much drama right now! :)

    Author's Response: oh there is going to be a lot of action for a while now, trust me ;-)

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