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Title: Chapter 19-That Night 05 Aug 2023 10:10 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the explanation - very helpful!
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 16 Jun 2010 11:48 pm
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful...
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 09 May 2010 9:30 pm
Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Pausing in my reading to say that I am very much enjoying this story! It kept me up until past 2:00, last night.

    Author's Response: thank you! I'm kinda glad I ruined your night :-D
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 30 Jan 2009 10:01 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this fic.

    The complexity of the characters, the tensions between what they want and what they believe, are all compelling.

    One translation note: I believe you meant that Lily entrusted Harry to Snape, not that she confided him. (Confide is to tell a secret, knowing that the other will not tell it further.)

    On to the next chapter!

    K

    Author's Response: thanks you ! very good point about the translation, I will correct, thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 13 Dec 2008 6:37 am
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was sad when I had come to the last chapter. How I wish that the other chapters was done. Excellent work by the way and I will keep checking to read more of this story. Merry Christmas Goddess Bless.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I promise there is a lot more chapters coming ;-) Merry Chistmas to you too !
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 12 Dec 2008 3:19 pm
Reviewer: balle13 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great, greate, greate!!! I love your story, it is one of the best, I read in the last time. Thank you for it and I can't wait for the next chapters. I'm so sorry I can't read french!

    Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you like it ! RaeWhit told me that we would have a ne chapter next week ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 10 Dec 2008 7:01 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Keina, I loved this chapter! I have to admit that I really couldn't read the last couple...I just can't bear torture scenes. But now Harry and Severus are safe again, and I hope Harry can begin to truly heal now...though I'm sure it won't be easy with all the horrible mind games that Voldemort has had done to him.

    I loved Severus' devotion to Harry in this chapter, and when he said, "Forgive me"...I had tears in my eyes. So simple, but so eloquent...and just what Harry needed to hear. Severus has made many mistakes with Harry, and this last one may be the worst of all, but I hope that they can work through it all.

    I'm looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Kristeh ! Well the last chapters were mainly psychologic torture, but I think it was hard eough actually !

    There will be some bad times ahead, but not as bad, and it will lead to interesting consequences ! Harry and Severus have both a lot of issues about guilt, but they will heal together if they can get on ;-)

Title: Chapter 19-That Night 04 Dec 2008 6:59 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG good chapter keep it up

    Author's Response: thank you, I'll try ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 04 Dec 2008 12:47 am
Reviewer: fluff (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story, Snape as slipped out of charater and yet is in, it just seems right. More please and soon as you can.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I try to keep them IC, though sometimes circumstances make it hard ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 11:48 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm not sure why anyone would leave at this point. This chapter was quite . . maybe wonderful isn't the right word--for it certainly isn't very happy but an excellent addition to the story and there is hope now. even with the surge of death eaters after them still. Let's be honest--that's not new to our Harry at all--regular day really.

    Looking forward to "what comes next!"

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you !

    I re-read the next chapter, and I must admit that it is really quite depressing. But yes, you can't expect Harry to come out of this pink and shinny, can you ? the awakening will be hard... but the worst it past now, at least ! ...well, I think so ;-)


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