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Reviews For The Last Gift
Author's Response: thank you! I'm kinda glad I ruined your night :-D
The complexity of the characters, the tensions between what they want and what they believe, are all compelling. One translation note: I believe you meant that Lily entrusted Harry to Snape, not that she confided him. (Confide is to tell a secret, knowing that the other will not tell it further.) On to the next chapter! K Author's Response: thanks you ! very good point about the translation, I will correct, thanks :-)
Author's Response: Thank you, I promise there is a lot more chapters coming ;-) Merry Chistmas to you too !
Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you like it ! RaeWhit told me that we would have a ne chapter next week ;-)
I loved Severus' devotion to Harry in this chapter, and when he said, "Forgive me"...I had tears in my eyes. So simple, but so eloquent...and just what Harry needed to hear. Severus has made many mistakes with Harry, and this last one may be the worst of all, but I hope that they can work through it all. I'm looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you Kristeh ! Well the last chapters were mainly psychologic torture, but I think it was hard eough actually ! There will be some bad times ahead, but not as bad, and it will lead to interesting consequences ! Harry and Severus have both a lot of issues about guilt, but they will heal together if they can get on ;-)
Author's Response: thank you, I'll try ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you, I try to keep them IC, though sometimes circumstances make it hard ;-)
Looking forward to "what comes next!" V. Author's Response: Thank you ! I re-read the next chapter, and I must admit that it is really quite depressing. But yes, you can't expect Harry to come out of this pink and shinny, can you ? the awakening will be hard... but the worst it past now, at least ! ...well, I think so ;-) |
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