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Reviews For The Last Gift
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 9:58 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't know why you lost readers because of this chapter. I think it was really good. I really like this story and can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you, there is a lot more coming ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 9:45 pm
Reviewer: xoAngelicDemise (Signed) [Report This]
    How could you have lost readers?! It was absolutely fantastic! :) Hurry up with more!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I know that Raewhit has already started the next one ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 8:53 pm
Reviewer: lucie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is absolutely wonderful. I think it's awful that you have had bad reviews and really wonder about some people. It is easy to see that you have put so much time and effort into your writing. The end of this chapter had been in tears and yet gave me hope at the same time.

    Loved it, loved it, loved it!

    Author's Response:

    well it wasn't bad reviews actually but half of my readers simply gave up ! quite frustrating ! Actually, I experienced my first flames with the last chapter... in English ! some anonymous guy/girl telling me that he as bored with waiting for an update ( after 4 days?!) and who did I think I was, did I think he was going to reread the story if/when I decided to update ? And then some rude comment about punctuation, and asking me if I ever read a book. Made me feel like slapping someone around.

     Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, the next chapter is quite sad too, but it does get better after that !

Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you out of your mind? Do you honestly think that we would ever abandon this brilliant story?

    I love it! Warm and fuzzy! We really needed that after the last chapter! I can "feel" Snape's protectiveness!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Oh he is feeling possessive toward 'his cat'! A lot of fluff in the next chapter too, though it will be tainted with angst too... poor Harry will have a hard awakening !
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 7:38 pm
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    They gave up on you? Plebs! I really enjoyed this chapter. Something about it just such a human reaction to a situation. Great chapter and can't wait to read the next one.

    Author's Response: Thank you ! I hope I didn't overdo the characters' reactions actually, I really want to keep them IC ! but well, with cats, you know ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I am loving your story very much......but this chapter was a little too painful for me. Please tell me that Harry will quickly come to realize the truth of his torture and begin to deal with it quickly.

    Thanks so much for sharing your gift with all of us.

    Author's Response:

    thank you ! Yes, the warning 'torture' was not excessive, I think ;-)

    Hum actually the next chapter is about a very confused and weak harry, but I promise that Snape will take care of it! Though he will be having a hard time himself, faced to the situation. Taking points won't help him here...

Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 6:32 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter as usual. I don't understand why you would have lost readers.

    So glad your updates are happening fast.

    Author's Response: oh yes, I can believe how fast Raewhit is ! I'm ashamed of my own slow path at translating AYLNO in French !
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 5:50 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    A good chapter! It brings the balance back into the story that was slightly disrupted in the previous one and gives me hope that Harry will get better! I hope he'll also be reassured about the Weasleys and his other friends soon! Severus really is stubborn here, isn't he? Dumbledore should have pinned him to the bed, lol.

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, he is stubborn ! Dumbledore sure was boiling inside all that time ;-)

    Reassure Harry will actually be a serious issue... but wait and see ;-)

Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 4:47 pm
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    well i thought that was great lol i've been waiting for ever for you to add this i couldn't wait to find out wut happened to them :)

    Author's Response: Oh and wait, there is a lot coming ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Nicol Leoraine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, I think it was a good chapter. Dunno why you lost the French readers, but I liked it. Can't wait for the next one, hopefully with much more awake Harry in it, lol. And also very curious of chapter 22!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you ! There are very few 'Snape adopts Harry " stories in French so maybe people just lost interest after the 'big attack' ? I dont know !

    And yes, I am sooo thrilled about reading your reactions on chapter 22 ! I wrote it something like a year ago now in French, and all the time thinking ' if only I could discuss this idea with the English guys', but I wanted to keep it for the right time. It might not be that much of an idea, but when I had it, it seemed to me a really good one in this kind of fanfics, something I never read anywhere. Anyway... until chapter 22 ;-)


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