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Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 05 Aug 2023 10:20 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Harry can keep the magic flowing back into him. Thanks for the riveting story so far.
Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 18 Sep 2009 7:42 pm
Reviewer: unknown reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story..
Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 21 Dec 2008 3:30 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad I finally got to catch up with this story, so much has happened since Lucius captured Harry...

    The torture Harry endured was absolutely horrible. Poor guy, he not only suffered immense mental pain, but got sliced up by a bunch of creeps and is having his magic drained from him. Which is truly awful, as Harry would be devastated to lose it. Voldemort and his followers are truly sick. Good thing the draining of his powers seems to have stopped now…

    Severus was amazing! He did all he could to get Harry out of there, my heart was in my throat when the portkey didn't activate. Lily and the Marauders were brilliant as well. Didn't Harry dream about them coming to help? If so, guess it came true, and I'm glad it did!

    Sev really has his hands full now. He not only has to protect Harry physically from the danger of Voldemort coming after him again, but Harry has so much mental stress and confusion. Best of luck to them both.

    I can't wait ’till the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, Harry losing his magic would be very bad indeed... for everyone ! but Snape won't let thathappen, will he ;-)

    He will soon have his hands more than full, though...

Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 21 Dec 2008 1:20 am
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I found this from someone else's search, and it's wonderful. Everything is absolutely beautifully told, and your characterizations are terrific. Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thank you very mch, I'm gladd you like it ! I hope you'll like the rest of the story :-)
Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 20 Dec 2008 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    This is such a powerful chapter! The whole ending...with Severus holding Harry, singing to him, trying to reassure him and give him hope...that all brought tears to my eyes. It is just lovely.

    And Harry still has a reserve of magic...I wonder if Voldemort's being able to sap him had to do with Harry being in despair? But whatever, I'm so happy that Severus was able to help him and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    thank you very much ! I like to make people cry ;-p

    There will be a matter of despair soon, actually, and how it interferes with magic. Chapter 22 again :-)

Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 20 Dec 2008 1:54 pm
Reviewer: xoAngelicDemise (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! Hurry up with more!

    Author's Response: I will ;-)
Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 20 Dec 2008 2:26 am
Reviewer: Neinka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Words cant describe how I love your story! It captured my heart! I will patiently wait for another chapter. Hope you update soon!

    Author's Response: thank you ! The next chapter is already translated, I will just wait a few day before posting it ;-)
Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 19 Dec 2008 5:43 am
Reviewer: Kathy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story was simply breathtaking. I do hope that you will continue it in English soon!

    Author's Response: thank you ! The next chapter is ready already, I'll post it in a few days ;-)
Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 19 Dec 2008 4:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was so beautiful. What a good man Severus is, and Harry is lucky to have someone who wil staunchly protect him and care for him.

    I hope that since Harry's powers are not being drained anymore, that he'll be able to transform into Shadow again.

    Beautiful poignant moment betweet Harry and Snape. You truly are a gifted writer Keina. Magnifique!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you ! He is lucky indeed, I wish I was a cat ;-)

    Powers will be a major issue in the next chapters, but... wait and see -)

Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 19 Dec 2008 12:26 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhh lovely. You had me worried for a moment about Harry's powers. I always love each new chapter and can't wait for the next one. Thanks for not being so evil this time :)
    Krishna

    Author's Response: hehe I tried to ;-) but wait until chapter 22, ah, I just can't wait for this chapter ! :-p

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