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Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 06 Aug 2023 12:38 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, terrific chapter ending!
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jun 2010 6:08 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful. Simply wonderful!
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 18 Jan 2009 11:37 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, great chapter! I'm glad Remus survived and I can't wait to see his part. Thank goodness Dumbledore had the idea to use Veritaserum because otherwise I think it would have been very hard for Harry to accept that his visions weren't real.

    And Severus is going to adopt Harry! Yay, I'm happy for them. They're so good together now!

    Author's Response: Ah yes, Remus survived by a very short vote lol ! Yes, Severus finally took his decision, good guy ! Leave it to a cat to find a suitable home ! ;-)
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 18 Jan 2009 9:32 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Now who’d have ever thought Snape would ask such a question, mere weeks (months?) ago? This just goes to show how much they’ve gone through and how their relationship has improved. I’m glad Dumbledore agrees to the adoption and I wish Harry and Sev the best of luck in having that accomplished!

    I'm glad Harry's fears could finally be put aside, and he now knows what is true and what was false. It’ll be great when he can finally see his friends again, Harry will definitely feel much relived to see them.

    The Dursley's deaths seem to have had a bit of an impact on Harry, which is sad because they truly don't deserve his remorse, tiny as it may be. I'm very curious about how his meeting at the grave-site would go down, once he visits it someday. Thanks so much for not killing Remus instead! *hugs* It's good he will have a part in this story, seems something good stemmed off from us Lupin-lovers, lol. ^_^

    So, chapters will be coming in later? Well, it’ll be tough, but your chapters are always nice and long, so well worth the wait :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, Snape is moving really fast ! It's a lot thanks to their relationship, and also to the fact that I think Snape is quite possessive; once he decided that Harry was his to take care, well, no need to wait until someone else gets the same idea ! HIS cat, after all !

    Harry will very soon see his friends, he will really need it !

    The visit to the grave has been written actually, and trust me, it will be eventful !

    Ahah, but don't be too happy about Remus, he will have some not-so-nice role in this story ;-) though, really, he does have excuses, or will !

    Yes, new chapter is on, I've got to work on the French one now ;-)

Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 18 Jan 2009 3:56 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Adoption by Severus, neat!

    PS: Hey. I like Remus. He's cool.

    Author's Response: oh, do you ? Well, I am too enthralled with Snape to like Remus too, I guess ;-)
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 10:40 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    THANK YOU for not killing of Remus. I just HATE it when people do that (including JKR-I still haven't quite forgiven the total blood bath at the end of the last book.)

    I really love the relationship between our two boys. Now Snape want to adopt HARRY! (dances the jig!) How wonderful!

    Looking forward to your next update!
    V.

    Author's Response:

    oh, don't be to happy about Remus, I don't like him too much, so- who know ? ;-p

     

Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 9:49 pm
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm about ready to learn French so I can read the other chapters! I loved the last question Snape asked Dumbles. Thanks for the explanation for the Protego spell. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response: ahah, don't try online translators though, they are terrible !
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Sadly, I do not read French, otherwise I'd be skipping off to read the next chapters! Yay for Sev wanting to adopt Harry! I got really excited there at the end, as well as during the part where Harry says he can't do it anymore and Sev's world shifts.

    You know, I rarely ever feel guilty about what happens to Dumbledore in fanfiction, but I kind of feel bad for yours now. He wants poor Harry to trust him again so badly, though I doubt it will ever be the same after the abuse. Hopefully he'll be able to handle school a bit better now that he's been reassured.

    Will Harry be able to handle going to school so soon after his ordeal though? I sure hope so.

    Great chapter--I love this fic so much!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I must admit that I sometimes felt sorry for Dumbledore myself, but he really is about to make some even more stupid mistakes, so... he somehow has to pay. gnak. Yes, I guess I'm bad with him ;-)

    The matter of Harry's trust will be adressed soon, and come back recurrently, because really, that potion was a 'good' one ! But well, Harry is in good hands now ;-)

Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 12:06 pm
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awwwwww! yay! that was awesone

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 7:14 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh thank god you didn't kill Remus! I would've been so mad! Thanks for writing, because this was another excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Poor Remus is going to have a big part in the coming chapters actually ( after chapter 30 ), a bit against his will, though ;-)

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