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Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 07 Aug 2023 1:31 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m intrigued by this Loki character. Thanks for another wonderful chapter.
Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 10 Mar 2009 4:18 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my God! You continue to enthrall me with this fantastic story. I love Shadow; it's like he's really part of Harry now, and I love the way you have developed a relationship between the cat, Harry and Sev. It all seems so profound and real. I can feel their affection for one another.

    I'm off to read the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 07 Mar 2009 3:16 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    what has remus been upto? has he been a bad boy consorting with death eaters, i hope the slytherins got the message and have taken it to heart. keep up the great writing

    Author's Response: oh, you're evil! Do you think I could be THAT bad? oh well, who knows ;-)
Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 01 Mar 2009 8:35 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, interesting. I'm quite surprised that Snape took Harry down to see the Slytherins, but I guess it did show where his alliance was. You have really gotten my attention with the last paragraph of this though. Remus didn't want to help Harry? I'm very interested in finding out why...

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Oh well, he knew that the Death Eaters children were gone, mostly, and he needed to send a strong message for his come back. That he did !

    No, Remus wouldn't come back for Harry... bad Remus, héhé!

Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 28 Feb 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    "He Refused?" HE REFUSED?!? And he lead Harry to believe otherwise? Oh this is so not good. Harry is going to either "flip" or he's going to be crushed. This Loki had better NOT be Reums or I might need to find use for a good wolf skin rug.

    More soon please! :-)

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he refused, I can tell you, I was there! The man said 'no' outright. Just like this. No matter what. And trust me, that was NOT outof confidence in Severus!

    But no, I can already tell you that Loki is not Remus, though that was a nice guess ;-)

    Oh, by the way, I don't like Remus as a character. It probably will show....

Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 28 Feb 2009 9:41 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really enjoyed this chapter. The scene between Harry and Severus got to me. Snape describing his love for Lily and admitting that Lily made the better choice in marrying James was well done. So many Sev stories think that insulting and belittling James is the way to go to make Snape the better man but I found this approach a more realistic one. I find myself respecting Severus more now. Great chapter and looking forward to finding out who Loki is.

    Author's Response:

    Actually Snape in this story at least, has a lot of pride but very little self-estim. He sees life as a succession of choices, and one's value depends on those choices... he did the wrong ones, contrary to James, who won Lily. Fair play. Except it's really not... but he understands.

    Ah well, a lot more about that later in the story!

Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 28 Feb 2009 4:58 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous) [Report This]
    what????? omg... that's intense. i hate your evil cliffies, btw. they're cruel.

    Author's Response: oh yes, I know ;-)
Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 28 Feb 2009 9:05 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Loved the Severus/Harry interaction.

    Kind of a cliffie at the end. Like Severus, you will have my undivided attention as soon as the next chapter is posted

    Author's Response: thank you ;-)
Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 28 Feb 2009 8:55 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, this is an interesting bit of information, considering how odd it sounds. Guess I'll have to wait until next chapter to find out just why Lupin refused to come to Harry's aid…

    I'm curious about whom this Loki person is, perhaps a werewolf? Whomever he is, sure sounds like bad news. I wonder how long it'll take until Harry's curiosity brings him into finding out more information then he should on the subject, though I agree he shouldn't be left in the dark.

    Things sure will be odd for the Slytherins once Snape and Harry resume going to Hogwarts. Those Death Eater children, Draco in particular, obviously aren’t happy with these recent events and I’m both curious and concerned about what they may try to pull. Though Snape warned them, there’s always the risk out there…

    Author's Response:

    What I can tell you is that Lupin absolutely refused to come to help Harry, even though Dumbledore tried to push every button, and that's saying something.

    Loki... ah, Loki! This second part of the story could be names ' Loki'! About Harry's curiosity, oh, my, that will be a true issue very soon... will Harry ever manage not to listen at the door?

     

    There is not much death-eater children left in Slytherin actually, they wisely decided to moved their offspring to Durmstang, as Hermione and Ron found out at the Feat. But there still have enough of true Slytherins to be a problem, though...

Title: Chapter 28- Those We Hold Dear 28 Feb 2009 6:23 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    I am one of your quiet readers. I decided it is PAST time to give you a review - a glowing review, of course!! I adore this story - you make Harry being an animagus a believable transition, and I love how Harry and Snape have developed such a trusting relationship. There is plenty of excitement in your story, too, and lots of action so I am always anxious to see what is going to happen next!

    I adore Shadow the most, so anytime you have him center stage I am very happy as well.

    Thank you for the story, and many thanks to your awesome translator Rae Whit for getting these chapters to us in such a timely fashion!!

    Author's Response: thank you, I LOVE reviews ;-) I'm glad you love this story! I really need to put some more Shadow scene by the way. Have you look at the OS 'The trap' that Raewhit trnaslated for christmas? Very Shadowish ;-)

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