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Title: Chapter 29 Don't Tell 07 Aug 2023 2:23 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a full chapter. I wonder why Dumbledore never assigned a house elf to protect Harry in the original series—-though likely it’s because of the wizarding world’s failure to recognize the true power of house elves. I also wonder what the letter from Draco says.
Title: Chapter 29 Don't Tell 10 Mar 2009 4:55 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very interesting story! So scary and full of plot. Mila

    Author's Response: thank you !
Title: Chapter 29 Don't Tell 09 Mar 2009 2:29 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Look out; big chapter = big review! :D

    I’m curious about the contents of that letter, that would cause Snape such distress...? At least Harry had some well deserve contentedness though. It was very thoughtful of McGonagall to give him that picture :) I'm sure he’ll treasure it always and I too hope he can experience other moments like that in the future.

    Some interesting things were revealed to Harry today; details concerning Severus and a glimpse into the extent of his powers. They sure are amazing, but also dangerously strong.

    As for Remuus: I've got mixed feelings about him returning as DADA Professor, for one. He's great at it, but there’s' the chance of something bad happening to him. Also, it’s sad he isn't as close to Harry as he‘d like, but it’s obvious why he’d choose to show Severus comes first, considering events.

    And lastly; I'm more curious then ever about whom this Loki is?! It’s killing me, lol.

    Author's Response:

    ow, thanks a lot ;-)

    Well Snape is more perplex than distressed, actually... worried, mostly. McGonagall can be a pain, but she has a lot to make up for and she knows how to be nice too- the cat's way ;-)

    Do I need to say that I don't like Remus? I think the guy is a coward. Well in this story, I will give him some reasons to be... wait and see ;-)

    About Loki... ah, he's the main problem in this story, and I tell you, he IS going to be a real problem ;-)

Title: Chapter 29 Don't Tell 09 Mar 2009 1:16 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Evil cliffie! Just plain cruel.

    Lovely chapter. I am waiting eagerly to hear what Draco's letter said, and what it is that Remus is hiding.

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Author's Response: oh yes I love cliffies! well, except when I'm on the reader's side ;-)
Title: Chapter 29 Don't Tell 09 Mar 2009 12:49 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a place to leave off! Now I'm not going to be able to get any sleep wondering what is in Draco's letter!

    This was a wonderful chapter and if I listed all my favourite bits this review would be way too long. The polaroid photo is among the top faves though. I also really liked it that it was Minerva's scent that got Harry sorted out about be ing able to trust her again.

    I must say that I am curious as anything about this Loki character (but I'm sure you'll tell us more in your own good time).

    Thanks for sharing this story. It's one of my favourite HP fics.

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    I hope you managed to sleep, still ;-)

    There is a looot to say about Loki! Really, a lot! I can't wait to tell you mor e:-)

     

Title: Chapter 29 Don't Tell 08 Mar 2009 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness--I can't believe how long this chapter is! It took me ages to read it! Great stuff too--I really like how Harry wants Snape to put his arm around his shoulder and that Severus obliged him.

    I wonder if it Harry trusted Minerva more because he could smell that it was actually her in cat form. I'm glad he's getting better about trusting people. His powers worry me though because I really don't think he understands what he's capable of yet. I hope he doesn't hurt anyone on accident.

    I hope Raewhit keeps up her super fast and excellent work because I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope we find out what Draco wrote.

    -P.G.

    P.S. Okay, this might be dumb, but I've forgotten who Loki is... Could you remind me who it is again?

    Author's Response:

    oh yes a lot too long, I realise now! I get a bit overenthusiastic sometimes!

    Raewhit is still the champion of translators, don't worry, the next chapter is there already ;-)

    As for Loki, don't worry, we don't know anything about it yet, except that he was in the attack of Hogwart!

Title: Chapter 29 Don't Tell 08 Mar 2009 4:48 pm
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    What did Draco write to Snape?? Much like Harry, curiosity is killing me where Loki is concerned. Am I reading right that Remus and Loki are in a relationship? I thought it was really interesting that house elves can 'see' the magic. Are we going to hear more of this? As always, this was a great chapter. Can't wait for the next update.

    Author's Response:

    Oh Loki and curiosity are going to be a lot of trouble very soon, trust me lol!

    Yes, there is a link between Loki and Remus!

    As for elfes, I haven't decide yet, but I think that there will be, yes!


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