| Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark
| 08 Aug 2023 1:19 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Oh Harry. He’s gotten himself into loads of trouble. He needs his Man in Black to keep him in line.
Harry...Remus....son? Please tell me I'm reading this as a godson?? Great chapter. I loved the Slytherin Green fur on Harry. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I think you did just the same error as Harry, and missed the important part, just after the cat left the place ;-)
I think the misunderstanding of Harry thinking Remus is his father was quite a twist and I loved how things ended in that scene, where Remus's true son was revealed. I thought maybe Remus was talking about Loki, but towards the end I wasn’t so sure. It was great how you made us readers wonder :)
Poor Ron and Harry and their green hair! I loved how Ron was so ticked off and Luna jumped right in with her oddness :) I'm also really glad that things cooled down between them and Ron realized it truly was an accident, and how was trying to accept the new look, hehe.
I'm really curious and concerned about what Harry and Ron walked into! Could it be a true trap or was he jumping to conclusions? Also, that scene with Draco was very revealing and I like how you mixed in the HBP-ness into it :D All in all, a great chapter!
Author's Response: thank you ;-) There will be a lot more misunderstanding around this misunderstanding :-D The green thing will be back again too, no wa I let this go ;-) As for the end of this chapter, I really wasn't explicit enough, no big mystery there, they just walked into a room full of Gryffindors holding cameras, for the posterity !
Well, I picked up that Loki is Remus' son, without any problem. That makes things interesting nad I'm curious to see how things work out in regards to him.
Poor Harry! Green fur and now a bunch of blackmail photos have been taken! I can just see his expression!
Bravo! An excellent chapter (as usual).
Dancingkatz
Author's Response: You're smart, very few people understood about Loki ;-) there will be a lot more confusion about Harry's misunderstanding though! poor Harry indeed ;-)
| Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark
| 14 Apr 2009 7:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg! I think I just realised who Remus' son really is! Sorry, I misread. We are all like inattentive children; aren't we? Hee hee!
Still absolutely adore this story, and I want a cat like Shadow! :)
Author's Response: eheh, I think you found the right person ;-) I want a Shadow too-with his Snape of course, it's a package deal!
| Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark
| 14 Apr 2009 6:11 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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Hi! Love the updates - Loki seems russian or oriental - am I right? I'm imagining a magnificent white-blue husky type! I love your humour - kept finding myself laughing throughout. (: Can't wait for Snape to wake up to a green cat!!! x
Author's Response: Well Loki is a very big grey wolf! as for where he is from... you will find out soon ;-)
| Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark
| 14 Apr 2009 5:46 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh you are too funny! I loved this chapter, except that I'm disappointed that it's Remus Harry's father and not Snape! I hope that this revelation doesn't ruin everything for Harry!
Green cat! I love it! :)
Author's Response: Oh but read better, there is a part in the conversation that Harry didn't hear- that part is important ;-)
A green cat with green eyes! Very amusing. Harry sure had an adventuresome day. Remus his Dad? Wow. Didn't see that coming.
Author's Response: arg, I think I should have put a sign *be careful with the part of the conversation that Harry missed* ;-)
| Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark
| 14 Apr 2009 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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What a fabulous chapter!!! Thank you Rae for translating so fast!! My head is spinning with all of the happenings. Thank you for letting US know who Remus and Dumbledore were talking about - I really couldn't believe that Harry was the son Remus was talking about, but I am glad I do not have to fret about that. If Harry is smart he will do what he is thinking about at the end of the chapter and ask His Snape about this - I am sure Snape would get to the bottom of it as quickly as possible. Oh, I am also intrigued by a Draco who threatens so much, has the dark mark, and yet is not actively trying to hex either Snape or Harry - there has got to be more of a story here!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: oh yes, a lot of story indeed ;-) But Harry can't talk to Snape right now, actually, that's the problem. As for Draco... hum, there is much about him, I just settled his case, and it's chapter 45 in French ;-)
Still reading it, still loving it! LOL green kitty. :-)
Author's Response: slytherin kitty ;-)
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