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Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 08 Aug 2023 1:24 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Dumbledore means well, but causes so many problems.
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 29 Apr 2009 2:33 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. The endings so sad. I love Hermione though!
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 26 Apr 2009 7:07 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, I missed this chapter! I couldn't figure out why the next one didn't make sense! Now it does! LOL!

    Of course now, I already know what happens, but now it makes sense to me. Great chapter as usual.

    Author's Response: lol yes I've got some problems with my updates!
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 22 Apr 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    OH, Can we kill Albus NOW for his little stunt? I know he ment well, but so many of his plans "for the good of. . . " just turn out rotten. He's not enough of a Slytherin to see all the possible NEGATIVE consequences--he's just to positive in his outlook. And then it comes back to bite them all.

    More soon please--don't leave me hanging here! (that was old Voldy in Harry's little "flash" and Harry really was with Sev in his "dream" wasn't he?)
    V.

    Author's Response: oh yes, dear Albus did a big mistake here... and he's going to be sorry for it ;-)
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 22 Apr 2009 2:59 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for a while, but I am still enjoying the story! I love the relationship between Severus and Harry, how Harry is struggling to fit back into Hogwarts and a somewhat normal life, the confusion over Loki...though I hate for Remus and Harry to be on the outs. I imagine that one day they might both find that misunderstanding quite funny.

    I had such a bad feeling when Harry had that dream and now I'm so worried for Severus! Harry has to find a way to help him!

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you ! As for the misunderstanding, it will sure get worse before it gets better ;-) and REmus will have a lot to say about... oh well, a lot of things actually!
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 22 Apr 2009 1:59 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Snape wakes up next chapter. After posting the review for the last chapter, I went back and re-read it. Doh! Stupid Rogue! Saw EXACTLY what you were talking about. duh!

    Author's Response: hehe, you know what, Rogue is the French name of Snape ;-p
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 21 Apr 2009 3:56 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, dear...Albus is in serious trouble now. The question now, of course, is will Harry wait for Snape to wake up before killing the Headmaster, and, if he does, will he get a chance to before Snape does? LOL

    Dang you and the cliffy, by the way.

    Author's Response: ohh yes , he is in serious trouble, I don't think there are a lot of people now that would say ' nice wise job, buddy' ;-p
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 20 Apr 2009 1:43 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh noes!

    Dumbledore you’ve got one pissed off and frantic cat-who-lived on your hands now... I'm very worried how Harry's going to react to this news and am deeply concerned about our Sev :( The best of intentions led to the worst of results it seems... I hope Harry can someway get Sev out of that dream hurricane of despair (courtesy of Voldemort apparently), I have faith!

    As for the Harry and Remus situation... Misunderstandings are the worst, and I hope that the truth will be revealed to Harry soon before his friendship with Remus is ruined. Also, I’m still wondering over Hagrid, and hope he reemerges (alive)…

    Author's Response:

    Bery pissed-off kitty in sight, actually, yes! I can already tell you that a lot of people are going to be unhappy - no big spoiler here!

    You will hear about Remus and Hagrid soon, though I'm not sure it's a good thing ;-p

Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 19 Apr 2009 1:18 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Cruel author! That's a mean cliffie! Grr... Other than that, I really enjoyed the chapter. This one had some particularly funny parts, like Shadow's tail being green and then Harry looking for green hairs on his head, only to have Ron tell him he should be looking lower, lol. I'm surprised he didn't get smacked by Hermione for that comment.
    I also liked this phrase: "Just Voldemort wanting to say hullo, nothing serious." Harry, don't you know you should be worried about this?!

    I have a bit of a theory about what might have happened to Draco, but I better not put it down here. I hadn't realized how many people actually read reviews on other people's stories; I don't want to give anything away if I'm right.

    I'm excited to read what happens next--I hope the next chapter comes soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    That's funny how I hate cliffies in others' stories, and keep put some in mine!

    You haven't see the end of Shadow's tail neither ;-)

    Next chapter... I have to ask Raewhit if we should put some 'warning' before, I'm not sure, I remember this chapter was a bit hard to write...

Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 18 Apr 2009 9:30 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, NO! Harry and Snape just can't catch a break.

    I really hope the confusion about Remus gets sorted out soon. Poor Harry.

    I bet Harry can do something to help Snape. (Crossing fingers, pressing thumbs, and whatever other luck inducer I can think of.)

    Thanks for the update.

    K

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry, the confusion will get sorted out. That's the way it will be you have to worry about actually ;-)

    Well Harry is gonna try to do something, anyway...


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