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Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 08 Aug 2023 2:03 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    What a totally crazy twist!
Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 14 May 2009 4:45 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    A: Harry as Snape's new master. Interesting. We're going to read more right? I'm presuming that Harry won't abuse the power right?
    B. My heart broke at the thoughts of how Harry felt when Snape was yelling at him.
    C. You're joking about the Rogue comment right?:)
    D. I loved this and can't wait for the next chapter. Your translator is wonderful and so are you :)

    Rogue

    Author's Response:

    A-Oh yes, you'll read a lot more about this! True issue there!

    B-Oh as for heartbreaking, way for the next chapter!

    C- totally not joking, I promise, on my cat's head! Rogue IS the French name of Snape ;-)

    D Thank you, she trully is a genius ;-)

Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 07 May 2009 6:41 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I'm still in shock from this latest revelation. Harry being Severus's new 'master' certainly is a disturbing thought, but it also brings them closer together. And Harry would never intentionally abuse his powers. Still... it's going to be tough news to break to the young wizard.

    In other events; I'm glad Severus decided against pushing Harry away! That would have truly crushed him. It was also surprising that Sev willed himself to speak with the headmaster, but clearly he deemed the conversation important. It was good of Harry to speak with him too, considering he was in need of some guidance after all that. I do wonder when Harry will finally get to ask about the whole Remus situation, every time the guy tries, something comes up, heh.

    BTW; I just loved the Shadow/ Severus interaction, so adorable! And yes Sev; all cats ARE that irresistible when they sleep ^_^

    Author's Response:

    oh yes, and Snape is really not looking forward to tell Harry about this ! Really, really not!

    I don't think that at this point Snape could have go back totally... but the thought crossed his mind! I think that the Remus Revelation will come up in the next chapter, along with some other ones ! Oh well at least, if I'm right, the next chapter will be a 'tissue alert' one ;-)

Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 8:06 pm
Reviewer: Quipped to Death (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! Simply a roller coaster of emotions throughout this chapter and such a twist in that the mark has changed to Harry's. I'm so excited as to where this story is going. Can't wait till the next chapter. Again I say Fantastic!

    Author's Response: Oh well, it's going... a bit far maybe, but it's going ;-) A lot of emotions ahead though !
Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 7:45 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    This is truly marvellous. I can barely breathe, thinking about the events in this chapter. I am so excited to read the next chapter that I'm bouncing in my chair.

    This, of course, is making my coworkers give me funny looks.

    The transformation of the mark is amazing. Severus' response to it is entirely accurate.

    Your ongoing saga is fabulous in how it shows how these two people, both terrified of being left alone (and reacting to that fear in their own similar ways--hiding and striking out), gradually learn to get over themselves and be there for each other. (And how's that for a convoluted sentence!)

    Good job!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much ! 'hi' to your coworkers ;-)

    I'm really glad you're enjoying it, this story has been my main 'personal production' in the past years, and it means a lot to me that people enjoy it !

Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 9:24 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I like what you did with the mark. Very clever. I know Severus is very disturbed by the idea, but I think it will prove very helpful. If Harry is captured, he could summon Severus to him to help or he could alert Severus of danger through the mark. I don't think Harry will misuse it either.

    I'm very excited to hear Sev and Harry talk next chapter! I wonder if adoption will be brought up soon :D...I hope so! Good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Well, it can be helpful or desastrous, depending of what they will do of it... but no, Harry wouldn't misuse it. It's going to be a real challenge though!

    The adoption is now dealt with ( one way or another ) in French, but it's chapter 35 ;-)

Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 3:26 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so I read this in French already, but I wasn't positive that I'd understand that Harry is Snape's master? Yikes.

    I was really anxious for it to be translated, because although I understood quite a bit, I wanted to really understand the story, which is getting better an better , by the way.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, you got it right ;-) Not in the way that Voldemort means it of course, but he is the master of the Mark!

     

Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 2:58 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    so agonizing....the boys need each other so much as a family....a job well done

    Author's Response: thanks ;-)
Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 2:14 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    What an interesting twist. One I never would have expectied--the Dark Mark changed to Harry from old Snake Face. I think that I'm going to causiously agree with Albus that, overall, this is a good thing. Harry would not abuse his "power" with anyone, let alone Sev. And it could be useful--a built in "Help Me" to call Sev to him if he was in trouble--or to get Sev out of trouble as a "beacon" to get home.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response: I loved to change that mark in this way! But it's going to be o so many troubles... I can't tell more, but it will indeed be important !

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