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Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 09 Aug 2023 12:03 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderfully emotional chapter. Like a cup of perfectly hot tea. I loved how Snape handled Mrs. Peterson.
Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 30 Sep 2009 7:19 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I kind of figured going back to #4 would prove to much for Harry. You handled everything great!
Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 24 Sep 2009 7:55 am
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh... this was heartbreaking in a good way. I loved it.

    Author's Response: more heartbreaking coming ;-)
Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 17 Sep 2009 8:16 pm
Reviewer: clauclauclaudia (Signed) [Report This]
    ***Snape raised his left arm and clapped his hand on his covered forearm. "There's a reason I bear this Mark. Don't mistake me for your lapdog, Headmaster. Never."

    Dumbledore's mouth closed, and he nodded, his eyes glittering.***

    That, is a magnificent scene. And everyone has a different understanding of it. Beautiful.

    Author's Response: ahhh Merlin, I'm so happy that someone got the double meaning of this :-) Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing that a lot indeed :-)
Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 17 Sep 2009 2:26 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What an awesome chapter! I loved it; there was so much depth. Poor Remus...it is a terrible dilemma he is in with Loki, and what a sad history for Loki and his mother. I hope that it will work out for them, but I just don't know if it can at this point.

    Harry's meltdown was so sad, but I am very happy that Severus was able to get through to him and that he had the adoption papers! What a nice ending for the situation, and they both deserve it.

    Great job again!

    Author's Response:

    thank you very much! I enjoy having the parrallels relationships of Remus/Loki and Severus/harry! Remus is in an awful state of mind indeed, very lost. And no one can't help him right now, no one can understand... if I liked him, I would even feel sorry for the guy.

     

    Yes, actually had a bad case of breakdown. We will soon learn more about this, too :-)

     

Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 16 Sep 2009 7:37 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter, I understand Harry going back and reliving his nightmare but what a way to end it, with Snape adopting him! Post soon!

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 16 Sep 2009 4:22 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, and I got your postcard from you and Snape! Thanks Shadow!!!

    Oh, my favourite chapter yet!!! Oh I just love this story, and I'm glad that you enjoyed your holiday, but I'm really glad that you and Raewhit are back!!!

    You guys rock.

    I am so looking to seeing Harry and Snape bond even more. I hope that we get to see a bit of their life and that nothing else threatens their happiness!

    Author's Response:

    Hey, I'm glad you got it! I miss Caledonia already!

     

    Glad you liked the chapter :-) I really have a lot of fun writting this story! There will be more of Snape and Harry soon of course, now that the idea of the adoption is started! the next chapters are going to be quite eventful, though!

Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 16 Sep 2009 2:11 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter--I'm glad that you conveyed how Snape would be hurt too if Harry refused the offer. I cannot imagine how it would feel on either side if one wanted it and the other didn't, so it's good that they both agree!

    I was really excited to finally hear Loki's story as well! You've crafted the argument between Severus and Remus very well; I don't know who to believe because both sides seem valid. Great job!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am really trying to keep a 'not all white' SNape, though this is hard ;-)  and yes, he definetely has made some mistakes here. Not that he will admit it, of course!

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