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Reviews For The Last Gift
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 09 Aug 2023 12:29 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a wild chapter. I wish Harry would think before he spoke.
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 16 Oct 2009 6:16 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent so fsr please update soon thanks

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 30 Sep 2009 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOAH! I'm totally on the edge of my seat waiting to read the next chapter. Loving this story to death.

    Wonder what the fallout's going to be from that delicious cliffie.

    Author's Response: thank you! I like cliffies, but only when I'm the guilty author, I must admit ;-)
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 30 Sep 2009 8:28 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus!! Poor Harry. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 30 Sep 2009 5:14 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    ouch, harry. ouch.

    Author's Response: indeed!
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 29 Sep 2009 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, that ultimatum... *sigh*

    Author's Response: quite bad, wasn't it ?
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 29 Sep 2009 12:57 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I don't like the way it ended. Harry blackmailed Severus emotionally. Naughty boy Harry.

    I think that Harry doesn't really understand what he needs.He doesn't know what it's like to have a parent; someone that's responsible for him, and whose number one priority is his safety. The poor boy always thinks he has to be the strong one; he thinks that he has to be the adult. He doesn't know how to rely on someone, and that's so sad. Snape just wants to protect Harry; be a parent to him.

    I hope that Harry gets it together soon, before he loses the best thing that's ever happened to him.

    Great chapter Keina. I always get so excited, when I see that you've updated.

    Author's Response:

    yes, that was quite mean, but Harry is being very emotional at the moment. Not really thinking things clearly, you see? After visiting graves, well... I think that Snape will understand.

    But they're on the right way ;-)

Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 29 Sep 2009 3:55 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, that ending really smarted. I'm not surprised that Harry said what he did at the end, trying to use Severus like that, but it didn't make it any less horrible. Poor Severus is probably about to embark on a nice guilt trip, courtesy of Harry. Ouch.

    I really enjoyed the stories about Severus' relatives and how Harry's emotions bounced back and forth and Sev during this chapter. Really, it was all quite good. I'm excited to see how they solve their latest problem; please update soon!

    -P.G.

    P.S. I have to tell you, I just got a cat and it's a black male named Shadow, lol! I own Snape's cat! I thought I might try and take a picture of him with a white lightning bolt on his head for Halloween...he'd be cute dressed as Harry Potter/Shadow from your story. I'll see what I can do (he's not a big fan of getting his picture taken, so it might take me several tries to get the photo, lol)!

    Author's Response:

    oh yes it was a bit naughty! But well, circumstances... I think he can be excused.

    I hope I'll be able to develop more of Severus' family's story, but probably not in this story.

    Oh and you're cat, that's just too funny! I totally want to see pictures! Does he like to take showers, too ? ;-)


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