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Title: Chapter 41: Dirty Little Secrets 09 Aug 2023 1:09 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That locket contains secrets! I hope they sort it out soon. Remus is being quite unreasonable about his newfound son. I wonder if Loki intended to get caught.
Title: Chapter 41: Dirty Little Secrets 28 Oct 2009 2:12 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! I know Remus wants to give his son a chance, but putting Harry and all the other students in danger isn't an option. They will need to find a good way to contain him.

    I wonder what will be discovered about the locket. I hope that Severus and Albus will discover it's secrets and be able to help keep Harry from being harmed further by it's influence.

    When is Severus going to tell Harry about the change in his mark? I have a feeling that Harry needs to know. I understand Severus' reticence though. I know that Harry won't abuse their connection, as he loves Severus very much.

    I can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    thank you !

    Remus is actually being a bit unreasonable about this. But well, he has his reasons!

    There is a lot to be said about the locket! about the mark, Severus is certainly going to keep it a secret as long as he can. He is really scared about Harry's reaction to this...

Title: Chapter 41: Dirty Little Secrets 21 Oct 2009 7:39 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! All the twists and turns!!

    Author's Response: thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 41: Dirty Little Secrets 21 Oct 2009 3:15 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Well. . . that was quite the roller-coaster ride! Great chapter!

    V.

    Author's Response: thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 41: Dirty Little Secrets 21 Oct 2009 2:41 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! That was so emotional. I love how Severus is taking care of Harry so well, and how protective he is of him.

    Very sweet bonding.


    I'm worried about Loki though. Remus is letting emotion get the better of him and that could be very dangerous.

    Great chappie Keina. I want more!!

    Author's Response:

    thank you ! Yes, Remus is really a bit too enthusiastic about his newfound son... whi is not exactly a harmless puppy!

     

    More soon :-)

Title: Chapter 41: Dirty Little Secrets 21 Oct 2009 2:23 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter--I was astonished by how much was going on. It was a good one with Halloween coming too because of the creepy scenes you wrote about the Dursley's house. When Harry was worried about the who might pop out of the attic or his room, I had to go and turn more lights on in my house, lol.

    Anyways, I hope we get to see how Dumbley reacts to the locket. I can't wait to see what has been happening with it. I'm guessing that it's not a horcrux if it's been in the Evans' possession for years upon years.

    Oooh, I hope we get more soon!

    -P.G.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    thank you very much! It's true that the timing is right ;-) I'm glad I made you freak out lol, I didn't realize that it was so creepy!

    Oh, about the locket, trust me you will soon know about it! There is a lot more about it than meet the eyes. Actually there is an hint in Lily's letter that the thing is not exactly what it is supposed to... wait and see ;-)


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