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Title: Chapter 43: Day of Truth 10 Aug 2023 12:00 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Moody handled that really well—-great dialogue. I’m looking forward to Harry’s interview.
Title: Chapter 43: Day of Truth 06 Jan 2010 12:18 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a great chapter loved Moody and Severus together

    Author's Response: I love to write those two together! Sarcasm as an art ;-)
Title: Chapter 43: Day of Truth 04 Jan 2010 12:25 am
Reviewer: icecream_effn_sundae (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent update! keep up the good work and update soon :)

    Author's Response: thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 43: Day of Truth 31 Dec 2009 2:55 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    YAy! Purrs from Severus!

    Author's Response: a lot of ;-)
Title: Chapter 43: Day of Truth 30 Dec 2009 9:54 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew that Severus could easily handle his part of the tide of questions that are flowing in Hogwart's at this time, but Harry is much more emotional and I hope that social worker doesn't upset him. It wouldn't be good if she ended up...inside out or something (though, it might be fun!xD).
    The interlude was lovely and only emphasized how wonderful a father Severus will be.
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    thank you!

    No spoiler, but there will be yet a lot more troubles ;-)

Title: Chapter 43: Day of Truth 30 Dec 2009 8:09 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OOh, that was great!!!! Severus IS purring, I just know it too. And that silky voice of his....mmmmm....


    I loved everything about this chapter. How sneaky Snape was, and Harry with his shield, and Moody's acting. Just wonderful.

    I want more!! :( HOpe you had a great holiday.

    Author's Response:

    lol of course he is !

    I hope you'll like the next chapter ;-)

    I had wonderful hols! Too shot, as usual, though!

Title: Chapter 43: Day of Truth 30 Dec 2009 7:10 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Delightful chapter.

    I loved Harry and Lily calling for a Lullabye. And the chaos regarding the adoption... yes. Severus is so wonderfully protective. Every time he says "...y cat" (Here: "You're going to upset my cat.") I get shivers of joy.

    And Now Moody knows about the new Mark. I love how you are weaving that in over and over again, so we get to see how it manifests in Snape's life... until, at some point Harry will find out. THAT will be something. Loving that plot thread.

    A few typos:

    With one last furious look for Snape should probably be ...furious look AT Snape.

    Also, ""Yeah, but I'm come back and talk to you about it later." Should be either I'll come back or I'm coming back.

    And there is a "liekly" that needs to be "likely" as well.

    Nothing to stop my enjoyment of your marvellous story, however.

    Thank you for updating!!!

    K

    Author's Response:

    Oh Severus IS very possessive too, that's his cat all right ;-)

    You can bet that Harry finding out about the mark will be quite something. That's not easy on Snape, but Harry?

    I will try to correct the typos, thanks for pointing out !


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