| Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2
| 10 Aug 2023 12:22 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Oh no! That didn’t just happen!
| Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2
| 28 Feb 2011 4:57 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Oh, I loved your use of Loki in this scene! I can't imagine a more nerve-wracking experience for everyone during Lupin's interview. And when the howl ended in a laugh... I was howling with laughter at the very idea! Fantastic!!! // Overall, this chapter is amazingly constructed, with each segment comprising its own mini-story. I really DESPISE the social worker, and it was great to see each person (especially Ron!) neatly side-stepping her attempts to trap them into supporting her distrust of the adoption. Harry and Severus were almost through with the ordeal when Lucius showed up-- NOW WHAT??! Also, it's obvious that Loki has listened to the entire proceedings, and I'm really curious as to how he will use the information. You've created a series of neat twists in this chapter-- wow! Way to go!!!
:0 No! Noooo, I need more!! I've been reading this at every chance I have had since I stumbled onto this beautiful fic and everyone in my family has been complaining that I'm becoming antisocial!
Their relationship is brilliant, the way you've slowly brought them together through all that craziness is just perfect. I love angst, and I love all the hurt/comfort. For once, I also love how Harry calls Snape 'Severus'. I find it quite awkward in other stories but you've managed to make it seem natural.
And all these twists, there's not a moment of boredom throughout every chapter, which is quite a feat.
This chapter in particular was awesome (even though you left it on a cliffy!!!). The reactions from all the people that Saintclair asked was genius and I loved Ron the most. So many people make him the bad guy, in a way, and you've got him spot on; surprisingly smart underneath all that Weasleyness. I love his discription of Harry and Severus' relationship - it's brilliant, so cute and charming and made me laugh out loud a couple of times.
I could write how awesome you are for another page, but I've neglected work for way too long!
You are amazing, as is your amazing translator. I only wish I listened to my French teacher so I wouldn't be stuck at a cliffhanger :0
can't wait for the next update,
Fabx
Author's Response: oh thank you very much, you just made me squee like a teenager ;-) I love cliffies, but only in my stories, in other's stories they just drive me crazy! Thank you for reading so far, and congratulation for having try French, it must be an awfully complicated language to learn, more exceptions than rules!
| Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2
| 12 Jan 2010 7:42 am
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| Reviewer: AtaGal8907 (Signed)
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I've been following this story for quite some time and I have enjoyed every chapter of it. This chapter was simlply excellent. I'm looking foward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you very much!
ugghhhhh!!! a cliffie!!!!! :( lol
cant wait til u update next!!! :)
Author's Response: oh yes I hate cliffies too... in other's stories ;-)
| Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2
| 12 Jan 2010 2:20 am
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed)
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Great cliffhanger!! Please update soon. :D Great interviews - specially liked Ron's one.
Author's Response: thanks ;-)
| Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2
| 11 Jan 2010 11:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating a great chapter
Author's Response: thank you!
Don't you just HATE Lucius Malfoy when he is on the top of his game?
Great chapter!
V.
Author's Response: ow, come on, Lucius is such a sweet guy! Yeah, well, ok, there IS a dementor somewhere waiting for him
| Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2
| 11 Jan 2010 8:59 am
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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Aaaaaagggghhhh! My heart my not be able to take these clifFhangers!
Excellent work, but PLEASE, PLEASE - put that woman out pf all of our misery! Is she in any way connected to Voldie? Or just that blindly prejudiced - Hopefully those memories of Harry's at the maltreatment of Malfoy will put her in her place?!?! And maybe him as well? Poor Remus. Sigh.
Author's Response: Well as someone said, she certainly wasn't in hufflepuff! I would bet that she often has tea with Umbrage, actually!
| Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2
| 11 Jan 2010 5:09 am
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| Reviewer: Chereche (Anonymous)
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*Groan* you just had to go and throw in that cliffie huh? This is the first time I'm reviewing but I just wanted to tell you that this is a truly amazing story. Congratulations on the great work you have produced!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope that you'll like the rest of the story!
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