Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For The Last Gift
Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 10 Aug 2023 12:42 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Harry can manage his jealousy. He was too forgiving towards Lupin and Loki.
Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 24 Sep 2016 7:01 am
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    I really do not understand Harry being so conciliatory towards Remus. I think I feel more like Severus is in the right in his thoughts for both Loki and Remus.
Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 18 Apr 2010 7:30 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really cool story!

    Author's Response: thanks!
Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 29 Mar 2010 1:22 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you grest chapter

    Author's Response: thanks !
Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 27 Mar 2010 12:35 pm
Reviewer: Buchling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can more than understand Harrys feelings concerning Draco. After all the things he did to him and others he really turned out to be a sleeky, back-stabbing bugger. He shouldn't have been at the feast. Draco might deserve a second chance, but it cannot be asked of Harry to do so. Also Snape might be well advised not to press Harry too much about this as he cannot bring himself to clear things up with Remus either.

    Great chapter; I could really feel with Harry in this one.
    Can't wait to find out how everything will develope.

    Author's Response: oh yes, everyone is a hypocrit here, but that's how people generally are! I myself woudn't have been too happy with Draco, were I in Harry's shoes...
Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 26 Mar 2010 9:36 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is preaching tolerance of Remus and Loki to Severus and yet, is unwilling to give the same to Draco. I wonder if he will ever see that it really is the same thing and will rethink his stance? Yes, Draco is a spoiled rotten prat who could use a swift kick, but that doesn't mean that he should be reviled. Hopefully, Harry will someday get to a point where he can tolerate or at least ignore Draco's presence.

    I'm ecstatic that the adoption is now official! I hope that the students will come to accept Harry's new status as Severus' son and won't give him any flack.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, everyone here wishes he could preach tolerance and yet get away with it! But that's not how it works, obviously!

     

    Yes, the adoption is done! One big step! :-)

Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 26 Mar 2010 5:07 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, the tensions are running high! I'm as shocked as Severus about the way Harry is acting towards Draco on such a day of unity. I hope the jealousy he seems to be experiencing doesn't go too far; Harry doesn't realize how powerful and potentially dangerous he is and when his emotions run high like that, anything is possible. I hope Severus tells Harry about his powers before it gets even more out of control, especially if Draco's hanging around all the time.

    Lovely chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Oh well, let's just say that Harry is not going to be done with jealousy for a while now, and with reasons. But you're right, this can't be good for anyone! Even for him!
Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 26 Mar 2010 3:08 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! I can't believe that Loki was about to attack Harry yet again, and Harry was so willing to forgive it, for Lupin's sake. What a big-hearted kid he is.

    I'm so happy for you Keina. Have a great trip! I can't help but feel that this is the calm before the storm for our boys.

    Great chappie. I can't wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry is willing to go to great extends not to hurt Remus... but maybe a bit too much, at least for Snape's sake!

    Thank you, I can't wait to be there! :-)


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5