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Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 10 Aug 2023 12:59 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was hilarious!
Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 04 Dec 2010 3:53 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this chapter. It was really realistic. The mixture on Harry's part of pain, unsureness, and contentment with Snape being his father makes the relationship real. And Snape's fear about Harry's power over him is realistic as well, since it is mixed with that deep parental love. (Don't children usually exert power over their parents, granted not to the extent that Harry does.)

    Is it bad that I kind of don't want James' wand to really work for Harry? So why can he use Snape's? When are we going to find out?

    Author's Response:

    THank you! In retrospect this is probably one of the chapter I should have cut off, but I felt like I was putting a lot of things into it at the time. I'm glad you liked it :-)

    As for James' wand, don't worry, you'll find out!

Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 05 May 2010 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. Loved the scene in the kitchen poor Severus!

    Author's Response: huhu poor Harry too!
Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 03 May 2010 8:16 pm
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Still reading and loving.

    Author's Response: thank you ;-)
Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 02 May 2010 7:02 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I didn't understand this chapter at all. Too weird. Anyway, here is a link for a hostel in NY. I have lived there myself and it's great!

    http://hinewyork.org/

    Author's Response: sorry you didn't like the chapter! Thanks for the link though!
Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 02 May 2010 6:26 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It is rather curious that Harry can so easily use Severus' wand. From Harry's description, it seems like it works just as well as his own. Will the same be true of James' wand or will Severus' be a better match?

    I feel bad for Draco. I know it must be hard for him right now, but that doesn't excuse his behavoir towards Severus or Harry. I hope that once he calms down he will see the wisdom in Severus' words.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Well there are actually several reasons why Severus' wand works so well... but actually, yes, it would work better than James', strange as it seems.

    Draco is being his typical selfish self, but well.. he's going through hard times too!

Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 01 May 2010 7:58 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I loved Moody and Snape together....too funny.

    Author's Response: thanks ;-)
Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 01 May 2010 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooops, pressed submit too quickly, it didn't register frogs.

    Okay, here goes.

    Author's Response: thank youuu, I love chocolate frogs! Yummy!
Title: Chapter 47: Party Consequences 01 May 2010 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!! That was so so good.

    I loved that last line. Very funny. Wow! Harry's powers are becoming very very strong; rather scary actually.


    Ooh, I think that Severus' gig is going to be up soon. Harry is not stupid, and eventually, is going to figure it all out.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: well Harry is not stupid, but he is kinda distracted at the moment... a bit too much, maybe! Poor Harry!

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