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Reviews For The Last Gift
Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby 03 Aug 2023 4:45 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a fascinating opening chapter. I know this story is unfinished, but I’m reading with the hope that more will be translated one day!
Title: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? 18 Nov 2016 8:13 pm
Reviewer: rowenasheir (Signed) [Report This]
    There is no difference between AD and TMR! The end justifies the means, t all costs and... neither would ever admit that they maybe wrong.
Title: Chapter 46: Let the Party Begin 24 Sep 2016 7:01 am
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    I really do not understand Harry being so conciliatory towards Remus. I think I feel more like Severus is in the right in his thoughts for both Loki and Remus.
Title: Chapter 45: The Day of Truth, Part 3 24 Sep 2016 3:55 am
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    I tend to write a review but I had to say something here. You've written the most detailed, aggravating (in a good way) adoption process I have ever come across in all the Severitus stories I read. A truly beautiful job. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 28 Jul 2013 3:39 pm
Reviewer: Alexander (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for this amazing story! I really enjoyed it so far! I'm now going to continue reading it in French.
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 08 Jun 2013 5:30 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This has been a wonderful story! I can't wait for more!

    I noticed you have a translator for another story posted on this site....... Any way that person can translate a few more chapters of this???? **begs!!**

    Author's Response: thank you! I'm afraid this is not the same translator, with All The Way we are two person translating: I translate French to Frenglish, and Dash11 translate Frenglish to English :-)
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 18 May 2013 5:43 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent story, please update soon
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 01 May 2013 10:20 pm
Reviewer: SimplyFox (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay wow I adore this story I just spent the last three days of my life devoted to binge reading the entire thing.
    BUT ALAS!
    As soon as I caught up moments ago I went to check when it was last updated....
    2010....
    A noise not human escaped from the very depths of my soul as I cried out in anguish over yet another probably never to be finished fic.
    This literally happened a minute ago I am very sad.
    I am almost tempted to try and learn french but I already need to learn German and Japanese so I doubt it will happen any time soon.
    If you do ever happen to update I assure you I will come running to read this outstanding and wonderfully written/translated story.
    It is by far the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever read.
    Thank you for existing and I hope to read from you before this story fades off into the abyss of time.

    Author's Response:

    ahhh yes, orship me, worship me ;-)

    Thank you vey much for your review! Don't worry: the story is still going in French, and my translator is still working on it too! Unfortunately, my poor Raewhit had a lot of health issues, but I think that if I finally manage to finish my story in French (it's not a problem of motivation but a pb of too much imagination, I appear to have the 3rd longest fanfic of the French fandom), I will try to translate myself. It certainly won't be any good, but it will be something!

    See you soon! 

Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 13 Apr 2013 4:45 am
Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OK - I was almost fired from my job.... because I spent all week reading this AMAZINGLY AWESOME story!!! Totally wonderful in any language!! Then it stops!???? I hope there is more - I may have to surf every other fanfiction website to hunt for more more more!

    Please return to the Harry Potter world and continue this saga!!!

    Author's Response:

    ow, I'm sorry, I promise there is more! My translator is still working on it, there will surely be at least a new chapter someday, and there is a lot more in French ;-)

    Thank you for reading! 

Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 08 Jan 2012 6:55 am
Reviewer: ds862 (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so wonderful! I love the way you write Harry and Snape, and so many of the other wonderful characters in your very unique plot. I just commented on your livejournal, but I'm looking forward to reading more when you manage to find a translator! I wish I knew french so I could read more, but, alas, although I adored the country when I went there last year on vacation, I was absolutely pathetic when it came to trying to speak it (I tried, though!). Thank you for sharing your time and your wonderful talents!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much! My translator is still working on it, so there is hope :-)

    Hey, next time you come to France, come to Brittany, I'll be your guide ;-) 


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