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Reviews For The Last Gift
Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby 18 Dec 2007 12:31 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good start.
Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving 17 Dec 2007 6:19 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Don't leave us here! Who's the cat? Why are the death eaters there? What's going on? Get him out of there!!!

    Author's Response: My betas are working on it, the cat is waiting eating some fish on a jumper ;-)
Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby 17 Dec 2007 6:06 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    That was such a sweet beginning. I can't wait to read more. Harry is so very loved, but he can't see it!
Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving 17 Dec 2007 5:08 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanx for the well written story.

    Author's Response: Thank you, all the credit goes to my betas really, my English translation was awful !
Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving 17 Dec 2007 2:39 am
Reviewer: bellatrix (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very good story, and a very good translation - I write my stories in French and English, too, and it's quite hard work! I think i'll read it in French as well, as I can't wait for the next chapter!!! :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you ! I love to translate too, but I found out I loved it a lot more from English to French, the other way is sooo painful when it's now your mother tonghe !
Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving 17 Dec 2007 2:24 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Intersting start to the story. I am looking forward to reading more and I hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: well there are 21 chapters in French, but it's sooo painful to translate, I'll try my best though ;-) thank you !
Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving 17 Dec 2007 1:49 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry...it's so sad how he blames himself for the deaths of his family and the others like Cedric Diggory. Vernon is horribly wrong, but he sure knew how to play on Harry's worst fears, though it's not a conscious thing on his part. He really does believe that Harry is to blame, which goes to show how crazy and disturbed he is.

    And it had been rather a good birthday for Harry, too. It's sad when a good birthday is being locked alone in your room, isn't it?

    I'm so glad that Harry has good friends like the Weasley family and Hermione. Hermione's gift in particular sounds like it's going to save Harry, especially with Death Eaters around.

    Please hurry and update again soon! I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you ! The third chapter is translated and waiting to be re-written in proper English ;-)
Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby 17 Dec 2007 1:40 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    That was lovely! I'm very impressed with your English, or else with your beta-readers hard work, lol. It's much, much better than anything I could do in a foreign language!

    It's a great beginning, too. I love how Lily, James, and Sirius came to Harry, how they want so much to help and comfort him. I'm very curious about what this gift is.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving 17 Dec 2007 1:21 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you very much for this story. I am looking forward to reading it.

    Your English is fine.

    Author's Response: thank you, all the credit goes to my betas really, my first version was awful ;-)

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