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Title: Chapter 48: Control 24 Nov 2011 3:23 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Hee! Absolutely adored Shadow's encounter with Titus! Just goes to show that not all feline behavior is pure instinct-- some has to be learned! (I could just SEE Shadow rudely sticking his nose into Titus' fur to smell him!!!) And who is the "other" black cat? Possibly Millicent Bulstrode's? (I suppose Harry never took notice of Hermione's scent when she was a cat-woman...) // Also, amazing details regarding Harry's training session. And he killed a boggart-- I didn't expect that! Hmm... Now I'm wondering if that foreshadows someone else's demise. We shall see... Terrific chapter, Keina!
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 19 Apr 2011 8:15 pm
Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed) [Report This]
    From ch 50...

    "Could you send Kreacher to hang me? I'd like to talk with him." -Regulus

    My gods, if the man wasn't dead and a painting... xD Sirius-ly too funny. =)

    HAH! A 36-year-old grandfather! Lolz, congratz Remi.

    Hee? What happened to Remi & Sev going drinkin'?

    Ah, I hope Draco's still... intact.

    Hmm... if Harry gets to meet Sirius, James & Lily at somepoint...

    He could ask Sirius what in the name of Merlin he's supposed to do with the house?

    Where is Lily's wand... Does Sev have it?

    And James... well... =)

    Is Remi gonna be an alcoholic?

    I absolutely loved Regulus... *sigh* I can't wait for more of this... Your ability to write the characters... *drools, green with envy*

    *... tracks & favs the story, + favs Keina...*

    Author's Response: thank you very much! I hope I will be able to answer your questions sometime soon, my translator is still working on it!!
Title: Chapter 44: The Day of Truth, Part 2 28 Feb 2011 4:57 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved your use of Loki in this scene! I can't imagine a more nerve-wracking experience for everyone during Lupin's interview. And when the howl ended in a laugh... I was howling with laughter at the very idea! Fantastic!!! // Overall, this chapter is amazingly constructed, with each segment comprising its own mini-story. I really DESPISE the social worker, and it was great to see each person (especially Ron!) neatly side-stepping her attempts to trap them into supporting her distrust of the adoption. Harry and Severus were almost through with the ordeal when Lucius showed up-- NOW WHAT??! Also, it's obvious that Loki has listened to the entire proceedings, and I'm really curious as to how he will use the information. You've created a series of neat twists in this chapter-- wow! Way to go!!!
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 08 Jan 2011 5:26 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it took me a while, but I've finally caught back up :D

    I'm really glad too, I missed reading this wonderful story. I feel bad for Remus right now.... But that sweet scene at the end got me smiling again :)

    Great chapter, can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: thank you, hopefully there will be more chapters in the future ;-)
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 30 Dec 2010 2:13 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter as always thank you
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 24 Dec 2010 3:19 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I love this story, and Shadow is a mischevious kitty! Albeit, a cute and sweet kitty.

    I don't trust Loki as far as I could throw him.

    I'm worried; what on earth is he planning. Great chappie Keina. and can't wait for the next.
Title: Chapter 51: Lions and Wolves 23 Dec 2010 7:06 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    The weather in the southern US is crazy. As per usual for this time of year. Cold, hot, cold it just can't make up it's mind. I'm glad to see you posted within two months :). Kudos on a well written, long chapter!
Title: Chapter 50:Black Day 18 Dec 2010 8:27 am
Reviewer: EchoingWhispers (Signed) [Report This]
    i love this story. can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 50:Black Day 13 Dec 2010 5:07 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to agree with Lily and with James (as much as I am not fond of the man) that Harry and Snape surely will have a fight. I know their relationship will survive it, but I'm sure it is going to be painful for both of them. I like the little moments of happiness that you allow them. Thank you for that.

    By the way, is there a way to relieve Snape's fears about Harry leaving him because the boy is not of his blood? That young man (Yes I just referred to Snape as young, American term of speech) needs a little more confidence in his abilities. Hopefully Harry will learn that his father is human in a not horribly painful way.

    By the way does Lily, James and Sirus know Harry was supposed to be in Slytherin and that Snape can use Gryffindor's sword? Because if they don't, a comment made by both Malfoy and Sirus would be wrong.

    Great job! Write more! Translate more!! I look forward to reading more!!

    Author's Response:

    ahh well, there would be ways, yes, but I love the angst so much! :-)

    if my (borrowed) characters were real, they would probably resent me very much! I don't think that the ghosts know about Harry and Slytherin, but they certainly know now about Snape and the sword! That certainly gave them a good laugh!

    next chapter in a few minutes ;-)

Title: Chapter 48: Control 13 Dec 2010 3:49 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I approve of Snape's methods. I don't mean to sound blood thirsty, but I would want my child to fight in any situation where he or she was threatened. I have a feeling Snape feels the same way. So are we going to hear more about Snape and James' wands and why and if Harry can use them? (I am determined to get an answer. I'm sure Harry feels the same way. *grins*)

    So is Harry ever going to blackmail Snape about using Gryffindor's sword? If he does, you should totally have it revealed to Snape that Harry was supposed to be in Slytherin. (I'll admit I was kind of hoping that Harry was going to tell Snape when he was discussing the honorary Slytherin thing.)

    So can we see Snape and Harry watching Wizard of Oz? Just curious, I could totally see them watching the movie together. Perhaps even seeing the play Wicked or watching Return to Oz. (If you haven't seen it, you totally have to!)

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