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Title: And the Story Begins! 30 Sep 2014 3:59 am
Reviewer: Arwen_Evenstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok. If Ariel had a dislocated shoulder, she would be in exteme pain. She would not just "massage it"
Title: And the Story Begins! 30 Dec 2012 10:28 pm
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. A very nice concept and spin on the original book with some of your own flair thrown in. However, there are quite a few grammatical mistakes and other things that make it a little difficult to read. Id recommend having a friend help edit and fix it.
Title: And the Story Begins! 22 Jan 2008 10:36 pm
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Feels like you've just switched names - Arielle for Harry.

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