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Reviews For Never Say Remember
Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 10 May 2008 6:58 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I read all 17 chapters this late morning & early afternoon. Now, at nearly 11:00 p.m., I'm rereading it, and better able to follow when our Harry slips into the other one's world. Much clearer, now that I've got my "sea legs", so to speak. Well done!

    Author's Response:

    Wow, you really must be hooked to read it and then re-read it in one day.  I'm glad it makes more sense on the re-read, but feel free to let me know about places where it could be less confusing. 

      

Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 09 May 2008 7:46 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a great premise! I'm hooked already!

    Author's Response: Yay!  A new reader!  :)
Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 16 Jan 2008 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is the best story beginning I've read in a long long time. You managed to introduce the characters in a very clear and evocative way and the appearance of Lilly was brilliantly pulled off. I've read so many stories, that I often find myself just scroling through the text without really reading.

    Your story captivated me from the very beginnig - I can't wait to click at the next button. And seven more chapters to read? Yay :-)

    Author's Response:

    A new reader!  Wonderful!

     

    It's good to know that I captured your attention.  I know some of my chapters are short, but I felt that if I added more words, they would end up being repetitive, or filler.  They would weaken the impact of the words already there, and cause people to do that scrolling thing. ;)  

    I'm happy you took a moment to review before you clicked that next button, tempting as it was. :)
Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 02 Jan 2008 7:15 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm very ashamed that I haven't read or reviewed your story before. It's fantastic! You've nailed Harry's character perfectly! You caught my interest from the first paragraph and by the middle of the story, I was hooked. My heart about skipped a beat when Harry saw his mother sitting on the bed. I definitely wasn't expecting that!

    You've also written Snape very well. It's actually very similar to how I'd expect him to act as Harry's guardian.

    But the greatest thing about this chapter is the dialogue. It's realistic and flows smoothly, and overall, this is just a very well-written fic! I love it!

    Author's Response:

    Don't feel ashamed!  Too many stories, not enough time.  And I'm making "write more reviews" one of my New Year's resolutions, because there's just so many I want to review and haven't yet!

    I’m so glad that you're enjoying the twists and turns!  It's always a delicate balance with the summary and story warnings…I want to let people know what the story is about without ruining the surprises. 

Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 28 Dec 2007 4:50 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, totally different from what I've read, very good start.

    Author's Response:

    First chapters can be a bit tricky.  Glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 21 Dec 2007 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!! WHoop!! I love this universe's Snape! And your Harry is done perfectly. He doesn't understand, and every thing's so new. Fantastic job! What a great story idea. This is awesome.

    Author's Response:

    Good to hear that you're enjoying it!  As I was writing, I became rather torn over which Snape I liked best.  Fortunately, I didn't have to decide.  :)

Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 21 Dec 2007 10:02 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Very interesting idea. I can't wait to see how the other Harry is faring with the Snape we all know and love. Should be exciting. Thanks so much for sharing your story and I hope to see a new chapter soon. Take care and have a blessed Christmas...

    Author's Response:

    Glad you enjoyed it!  Merry Christmas and happy holidays to you and everyone here.  I'll put a big red bow on the next chapter and post it soon. 

Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 21 Dec 2007 3:05 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for posting. This is defintely an intresting spin on this type of story, very original. Looking forward to reading more keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the feedback.  Now that the site is back up, I'll do my best to post regularly.

Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 21 Dec 2007 2:55 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting. I can't wait to see how the other Harry reacts.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I can't tell you how motivational these reviews are!

Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 21 Dec 2007 2:30 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Having Lily be alive in one universe is a very interesting twist. I don't think I've seen that done. It should be interesting to read a story by a new author who hasn't read all the other gazillion "Snape adopts Harry" fics.

    Author's Response:

    I'm a total sucker adoption fics now, though!  But I did write 95% of this before my eyes became sullied by my new adoption fic addiction.      


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