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Reviews For Never Say Remember
Author's Response: Wow, you really must be hooked to read it and then re-read it in one day. I'm glad it makes more sense on the re-read, but feel free to let me know about places where it could be less confusing.
Author's Response: Yay! A new reader! :)
Your story captivated me from the very beginnig - I can't wait to click at the next button. And seven more chapters to read? Yay :-) Author's Response: A new reader! Wonderful!
It's good to know that I captured your attention. I know some of my chapters are short, but I felt that if I added more words, they would end up being repetitive, or filler. They would weaken the impact of the words already there, and cause people to do that scrolling thing. ;) I'm happy you took a moment to review before you clicked that next button, tempting as it was. :)
You've also written Snape very well. It's actually very similar to how I'd expect him to act as Harry's guardian. But the greatest thing about this chapter is the dialogue. It's realistic and flows smoothly, and overall, this is just a very well-written fic! I love it! Author's Response: Don't feel ashamed! Too many stories, not enough time. And I'm making "write more reviews" one of my New Year's resolutions, because there's just so many I want to review and haven't yet! I’m so glad that you're enjoying the twists and turns! It's always a delicate balance with the summary and story warnings…I want to let people know what the story is about without ruining the surprises.
Author's Response: First chapters can be a bit tricky. Glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Good to hear that you're enjoying it! As I was writing, I became rather torn over which Snape I liked best. Fortunately, I didn't have to decide. :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Merry Christmas and happy holidays to you and everyone here. I'll put a big red bow on the next chapter and post it soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. Now that the site is back up, I'll do my best to post regularly.
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't tell you how motivational these reviews are!
Author's Response: I'm a total sucker adoption fics now, though! But I did write 95% of this before my eyes became sullied by my new adoption fic addiction. |
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