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Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 19 Oct 2014 7:56 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool, I expected this story to be dumb based on the description but it's actually awesome. A reddit post recommended you, I'm glad.
Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 20 Jan 2013 8:25 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Arrrrgh! I feel so bad for everybody! My heart and tear ducts are just going to explode!

    Otherwise, great chapter and I just really hope that people start connecting soon or I'm just going to go mental with emotions.
Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 19 Mar 2009 8:33 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness, that's so sad! You almost made me cry when Harry got the news, but especially when Snape treated him in a very unfatherly way. :(

    Despite my frowning face, I'm very much loving the plot here. Good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: :)  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Even if you're almost crying.  ;)
Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 14 Oct 2008 11:45 am
Reviewer: Ava-ntGarde (Signed) [Report This]
    It would be very upsetting to go from having a family to a alternate world where you have none. I think it will be interesting to see the effect this has on real Harry and Snape's relationship, I hope it improves it of course.

    This story has me very intrigued thus far so i am on to the next chapter.

    Cheers, Ava.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I'm glad you've been enjoying the story.

Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 03 Aug 2008 11:28 pm
Reviewer: Kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So which one is OUR harry?

    Author's Response:

    Hopefully this becomes clearer later...

Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 10 May 2008 7:02 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I know how I got initially confused. This chapter's sub-heading is "Known World: Harry". But isn't this Parallel Harry in the Known World? Or otherwise put "Known World/Parallel Harry"?

    Author's Response: Hey, good point.  I was referring to the world they were in, and then the person whose POV it was.  But your way might (finally) solve the confusion issue!  I used that on the most recent chapter update. 
Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 30 Mar 2008 9:09 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Holy Wow, Malora! I am just starting this. I don't know where I've been. I can't believe I've never read this before and I am totally riveted. I am already invested in these two Harrys. Wow and just more wows. What a great promise and I already feel like crying for both Snape and Harry. Both Harry and the dad Snape. LOL Great chapters. I am going to read more now.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I love getting new readers.  They get to enjoy the early moments in the story that I haven't thought about in a while.  :)  I'm happy it captured your attention. 

    Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 16 Jan 2008 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Better and better:-) Did I mention I really love your story? Because I do! I like the way Snape and Harry seem so different and yet strangely alike in these two dimensions. Can't wait for more!
    Thanks for taking your time to write:-)

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I tried to keep them in character despite their different experiences.
Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 02 Jan 2008 7:20 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    A great description:

    "Harry nodded. He stood, hardly feeling his legs."

    **Kind of the same way I felt when I realized that Harry had fallen into another demention.

    This is a wonderfully emotional chapter, and I was really hoping that Snape wouldn't do anything to upset Harry... I'm glad my hopes weren't crushed :)

    Another fabulous chapter! I think it's actually quite brilliant the way you vary chapter lengths. Change it up a bit ;)

    Author's Response:

    I love hearing your reactions! 

    I am trying to nudge some of my shorter chapters into the 800-word range, but they will still vary quite a bit in word count.  I believe that a story should be as long as it needs to be, and no longer (or shorter). 

Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 28 Dec 2007 4:55 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response:

    I'm pleased you enjoyed it.  More soon!


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