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Reviews For Never Say Remember
Otherwise, great chapter and I just really hope that people start connecting soon or I'm just going to go mental with emotions.
Despite my frowning face, I'm very much loving the plot here. Good work! -P.G. Author's Response: :) I'm glad you're enjoying it! Even if you're almost crying. ;)
This story has me very intrigued thus far so i am on to the next chapter. Cheers, Ava. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you've been enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Hopefully this becomes clearer later...
Author's Response: Hey, good point. I was referring to the world they were in, and then the person whose POV it was. But your way might (finally) solve the confusion issue! I used that on the most recent chapter update.
Author's Response: Thanks! I love getting new readers. They get to enjoy the early moments in the story that I haven't thought about in a while. :) I'm happy it captured your attention. Thank you for reviewing!
Thanks for taking your time to write:-) Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to keep them in character despite their different experiences.
"Harry nodded. He stood, hardly feeling his legs." **Kind of the same way I felt when I realized that Harry had fallen into another demention. This is a wonderfully emotional chapter, and I was really hoping that Snape wouldn't do anything to upset Harry... I'm glad my hopes weren't crushed :) Another fabulous chapter! I think it's actually quite brilliant the way you vary chapter lengths. Change it up a bit ;) Author's Response: I love hearing your reactions! I am trying to nudge some of my shorter chapters into the 800-word range, but they will still vary quite a bit in word count. I believe that a story should be as long as it needs to be, and no longer (or shorter).
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