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Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 20 Jan 2013 8:32 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Merlin that was awful. I mean the writing was great but it was such a heartbreaking chapter. I really think this Harry has it a lot worse. I can't believe that you just told this Harry that he wasn't good enough for his mum. And Snape wants to get rid of him . . . I guess my desire to scream at Snape right now is just proof that you are just an amazing writer.
Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 19 Mar 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. I wonder if he'll ever be able to embrace the love that Snape will probably want to give him here. I mean, it is a possibility that Harry might not make it back and will have to live in this new world. I hope he'll be able to accept things as they are eventually.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Hmm...well, I'm not giving away plot points.  You'll have to read on and see! 
Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 20 Sep 2008 5:06 am
Reviewer: nixglen (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 03 Aug 2008 11:36 pm
Reviewer: kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for putting that age explaination in, I think you chose well
    I feel soo bad for Harry though, he finally gets to see his mum and Lily's just soo upset about loosing her Harry

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you found that helpful.  I don't do as many author notes now, and was wondering if I should keep the ones I have.  But I did like sharing my thoughts in that note, so it's good to know it was useful. 

    Thanks for reviewing! 

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 28 May 2008 2:27 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    This is quite well done. I wasn't sure about reading it at first, and actually passed over it several times because I wasn't sure that I could deal with something so AU, and also with something that wasn't made to bring Harry and Snape together, but was made to show two sides of both of them. However, I read the summary so many times that I became curious about it and couldn't stop myself from reading it, especially considering there wasn't much else to do in Health class. After reading the first chapter, however, I realized that you really are quite a decent writer and I became intruiged with the story, and here I am at home reading it when it's not my only option, which is saying quite a lot about your story... If you'll excuse my ramblings?

    Author's Response:

    You're excused.  ;)  Thanks for the info on why you passed on the story before; I'm curious about who chooses to read the story and why or why not.  Glad you're enjoying it!

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 16 Jan 2008 7:10 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ah the angst - yummy :-)

    I wish more stories were written like your's.
    You have the talent of making the dialogues sound meaningful and expressive without bein cliché, very good job indeed!

    Author's Response:

    Who doesn't like angst?

     

    Thank you for giving me your reactions on every chapter.  It's delightful.  :)

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 02 Jan 2008 7:30 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow...I love this story. I mean, LOVE it! You've created such a powerful, emotional story. Again, Harry is perfect in every way. Ans I think you're exactly right about thirteen being a perfectly defiant age. I loved the way Severus dealt with Harry about his ankle and bruised knuckles.

    I particularly loved these lines:

    "He felt a pang of grief as he stared at the stranger who had replaced his son. Where once there had been love and playfulness he now saw bitterness and loathing."

    **Reading this paragraph gave me the same sad, deep feeling in the pit of my stomach that I got when reading certain chapters of Deathly Hallows. Amazing.

    "I'm sure the walls rue the day they met as formidable an opponent as yourself."

    **I appreciate the bit of humor in such a heavily poignant story. I really laughed hard at this. Actually, I smiled several times throughout this story :)

    I felt such pain for Harry at the end of this chapter, as well as for Severus. I can only imagine how difficult that would be.

    Well, you've definitely got me hooked. This is stunning.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for giving such detailed reviews! 

    I’m a veteran of Buffy fandom and what originally hooked me on that show was the combination of humor and tragedy.  The emotions sparkle more when you have a bit of both. 

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 31 Dec 2007 8:18 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 31 Dec 2007 6:28 pm
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Wooo, wonderful chapter! Please update soon. I'm finding your story more and more delightful each time.

    Author's Response:

    I appreciate the kind words!  Definitely more soon.

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 31 Dec 2007 6:19 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow. That will probably feel like Lily rejected him. I feel so sorry for all of them. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he probably had a very idealized version of what seeing his mum would be like, and it doesn't seem to be working out that way.    Thank you for reading and reviewing!


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