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Reviews For Never Say Remember
Lio Author's Response: Thank you! I did a lot of re-reading of the books to keep the characters in mind, and I'm glad that's coming through.
I think my favorite part was when Harry was climbing up the shelves and Severus told him to get down, but wasn't sure whether or not he was worried about Harry's bones or the glass breaking. So Snape-like. This story is just giving me that warm feeling I get when I read something really great and original. Thanks so very much for sharing :) Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for your reviews! Your favorite line was actually one I wrote only a few hours ago. I was looking at the line, "You'll break something," and trying to decide if Snape meant the jars or Harry's bones. But of course, it's Snape, so it could go either way!
i've been reading this fic since it began, but i admit it, i'm a very lazy little elocution, and this is the first time i'm reviewing. -sighs- i really need to get better at that, don't i? anyway, the title kind of caught my eye, and with the end of the chapter...i'm speculating. hmm. of course, my suspicions are probably totally unfounded here, which wouldn't exactly surprise me anyway...but still. you're making me think. i like that. :-) to avoid making myself sound like a rambling buffoon (cough-which i am-cough), i shall steer the topic to less speculative things, like, you know, the parts of your story that you've actually posted and i read. whoo. the body language is awesome. this is probably most pronounced at the end, where you see snape watching the dust, and harry rubbing his hands on his robes, biting his lips, and generally acting pretty awkward. it makes me have a running strip of film running through my head, which is always fun when i can drool over snape. -nods- the reactions of all the characters are pretty real, too. harry's clinginess to his newfound mother makes my heart ache, and the other harry's utter boldness is adorable. i mean, skipping down the dungeon steps? and poor old snape, staring and, quote, "disturbed"...lol. poor guy doesn't know what hit him. oh, and lastly, before i shut up and attempt to persuade myself into gasp! sleeping!, i liked the part where harry was all, dude, my name is snape, you weirdo! first it made me confused, (since, no, i'm not the brightest of cookies), but once i finally cottoned on to why harry was blurting out names, it made me feel all warm and fuzzy. this feeling could also be attributed to the fact that i'm under a pile of blankets and should be asleep right now. who knows? :-) cheers! love your story! Author's Response: Your review was great. "my name is snape, you weirdo!" Ha! Although my stomach fluttered when you began to speculate. I have an intelligent friend who can always guess what my next plot twist is, and it leaves me feeling deflated about my plodding and obvious writing. But of course she is very quick and perceptive so I try not to take it personally. :) How about a New Year's resolution for everyone: write reviews for every fic you enjoy. I'm going to try it. It's got to be easier than those other resolutions, like "exercise more" and "finish all those writing projects on your hard drive." |
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