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Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 20 Jan 2013 8:52 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    This Snape is not exactly nice, but I think it's amazing how much he puts up with from this Harry. Thanks again for writing this, it sounds extraordinarily difficult so I really appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 22 Mar 2009 5:41 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    My heart bleeds for Severus every time I read the sentence: "'Even there, I'm responsible,' he whispered." Heartbreaking.

    Author's Response:

    I love reviews of earlier chapters, because it makes me go back and read those chapters again.  Which reminds me of little details, and then I include hints of those early details in later chapters.  And that (I hope) makes for happier reviewers! 

    Part of Severus's personality is his guilt over past mistakes.  He sees that even in the actions of his other self. 

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 19 Mar 2009 9:14 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear...I imagine there is no way for the conversation to go anywhere but downhill after that, lol. Great chapter! I especially liked how Harry compared Hermione's mind to a "steel trap" and is really appreciative of her intelligence. The other Harry takes it for granted, really.

    I'm very curious about why other world Hermione pities Harry; is it because of his mom?

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yes; this Hermione knows about his mom.  Everyone at the school would, since she works there. 
Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 14 Oct 2008 12:20 pm
Reviewer: Ava-ntGarde (Signed) [Report This]
    I can actually see Ron not responding very well to a situation like this. As much as I love him he can be/ is very narrow minded and set in his ways and beliefs even if they are mistaken. So I can identify with your notion that things with Ron didn't go well.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I think it fits his character.  It doesn't make him a bad person, just one who's already made his mind up about certain people.

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 10 May 2008 7:51 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the way Parallel Harry gave Known Snape the bubblefruit, which he accepted, then ate. Very nice touch.

    Author's Response:

    I think he needed a little bubblefruit at that point.  :) 

     

    Thank you for all the reviews!  :D   

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 16 Jan 2008 7:38 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your Ron is gorgeous! And I like your Hermiony too. It's getting uncanny!

    Author's Response:

    Well, I referenced the books as I wrote to remind myself what the characters are like.  Glad to know it helped.  :)

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 06 Jan 2008 12:31 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no...Ron... I loved how you ended it: "The conversation went downhill from there." lol. So clever. I just love the Harry that's stuck in this world. He's adorable. I could just picture him trailing after Severus and getting shrugged off by him...

    I can't wait for the next couple of chapters, and of course, Ron's reaction! I'm really anxious to see how Harry reacts to Snape shoving him against the wall (last chaper).

    Brilliant, as always :)

    Author's Response:

    I think Severus is distinctly uncomfortable being the focus of Harry's intense ability to love. 

     

    Next chapter is AU Snape's POV, but we'll get back to Harry soon. 

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 10:11 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 8:09 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Boy. Ron's not going to take this conversation well at all! I love this story. It's so unique and fun. I can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you find it unique!  I was a bit nervous when I realized my "unique" idea of Snape adopting Harry had already been done in so many different ways.  But I also realized later that the story has elements of Hamlet in it, so I suppose most story premises are already out there in one form or another.  I can still be unique in the style and details.     

     

    Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 7:22 am
Reviewer: Lio Saoirse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ron just so lost en't he!! i feel kinda bad for him, but the i just have to laugh! he really does have the emotional range of a teaspoon, excited happy sad or angry, and thats it!

    Lio

    Author's Response:

    Don't forget jealous!  Ah well, he does bring the fun in!

     

    Thank you for your feedback!


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