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Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 5:15 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whooo! Fantastic chapter. I really like his Harry, and how its demonstrated how well he knows Severus- knowing that the key to spending time with him is lily, for example. Ron, I'm disappointed in. But I suppose that he will eventually turn around. I'm wondering if this Harry has a crush on Hermione? I also wonder what Snape is talking to Dumbledore about - is he confessing some past sin? Thank you for the update!

    Author's Response:

    I was surprised how much chemistry Harry & Hermione had when I wrote them.  I think he just appreciates her amazing memory, considering his family history.  He's got a lot on his plate and is just a smidge too young to get romantic.  

     

    Snape was going to tell Dumbledore what he'd just learned from Harry about Lily.  In chapter 4, Dumbledore told Snape he wasn't sure how much passion this Harry had for fighting Voldemort, as Harry wasn't willing to discuss any tragedy he'd suffered in his life with the headmaster.  I'll tweak the phrasing a bit in editing so it's clearer.  Thanks!

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 3:55 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, can't wait to see Ron's reaction to THAT! *imagins Ron falling out of chair then jumping up and demanding WHAT?! in disbelief* hehe. You know, I'm likeing this story more then I thought I would, I'm not up for two demention stories, but the way you have this is quite good. My favorite prosepective is our Snape with the other Harry. So cute! The other Harry makes me think of a little hyper kid, makes me smile. Please post again soon!

    Author's Response:

    I’m glad you were willing to check out the story!  I've often been pleasantly surprised by stories I didn't think I would like.

     

    Many thanks!

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 1:56 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked Ron's comments about Harry going mental. Poor Ron will be in denial now that he found out who Harry's step dad happens to be. Great chapter and I hope there will be more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Ron doesn't seem ready to have his best mate defend his least favorite professor.  :)

     

    Thank you for your thoughts!

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 1:19 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how this chapter subtly showed what Harry would have been like with a good home life. The hints about Draco are intriguing and I look forward to finding out more. And it's interestingn that the other world's Ron doesn't like Harry much. That will be a shock for our Harry. And our Snape is in for a surprise when he sees that Harry could be a good potions student if he had had the right incentive.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, this is a Harry who asks for help and seeks a connection…he isn't trying to do everything on his own.

     

    I’m glad you liked the chapter.  It doesn't have the intensity of some of the previous ones, but they can't all be 100% pure adrenaline (cheesy line from a cheesy action movie).

     

    Merci beaucoup! 


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