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Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 20 Jan 2013 8:57 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wait I just realized something. If Voldemort attacked the Potters then why wasn't Harry attacked? And if he was, then why is Severus not considered a traitor for adopting Harry. And if he is, then why would Harry be spending playdates with death eater-Lusius' son, Draco?
    Awww, Snape was super sweet at the end of this chapter.
Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 19 Mar 2009 9:20 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, I'm excited for the next chapter! I bet Harry will do a really good job in Potions!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: The odds are good...  :) 
Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 14 Oct 2008 12:32 pm
Reviewer: Ava-ntGarde (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Goodness Snape and a screaming Harry was too funny. I really enjoy the fact that both Snape's have that notion of deep guilt for equally significant actions as it is one of his defining traits (if not the defining trait)and to acknowledge that is to keep an essence of canon Snape and to be honest its the thing that endears him to me. If you truly consider Snape's life and the reasons behind his actions I think it would be hard for anyone not to at least understand that.

    The only 'negative' of this chapter wash that is seemed a little disjointed, I think with the varying time frames covered it needed to be a bit longer consequently with more detail to smooth the way from one scene to the next. Otherwise I really enjoyed learning more pieces of the puzzle.

    Author's Response:

    Originally this chapter only had the scene in the present day.  That felt too short, so I included more backstory, as I felt it related to what was happening in the present.  But it's been a while since I've read it--I may look at it now and see where more of a transition could have been used. 

    Thank you for the review!

Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 10 Jan 2008 3:13 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    A beautiful chapter. You're write in such an originally descriptive way. It's nearly poetic. Every time I come to the end of a chapter I'm just left wanting more. A particularly brilliant line:

    "He tried to smile, but only managed a grimace. He ducked his head, letting his hair veil his face. It was a gesture left over from adolescence, and one of the many aspects of his body language he'd rigorously drummed out of himself as he learned Occlumency."

    **I just loved the fact that Severus felt so vulnerable in front of Lily. It was a lovely description and said so much about what kind of person Severus is.

    Seriously, keep up the excellent writing. I'm just so impressed with this.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I wanted to show that this wasn't a one-sided relationship.  They can both be vulnerable, each needing the other. 

Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 09 Jan 2008 6:38 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I must say, when I first saw this story I had no intention of ever reading it. It just didn't seem like something I'd like. However, out of extreme bordom and curiosity I decided to give it a try. And I must say it is amazing.

    One thing I really enjoyed about it I suppose is that you didn't spend chapter's and pages on how the Harry's switched and it didn't take long for them to realize what the problem was. For a lot of stories that deal with plans of existence so much time is spent trying to figure out whats going on it takes away from everything else.

    Also, you characterizations are brillant! You manage to keep both Snape in character somehow.

    I'm really sorry that I didn't read this story as soon as it was posted, but I must say that now I'm hooked.

    Please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Ha!  "extreme boredom," you say?  Well, my thanks go out to the January blahs, as they've driven you to click on my story!

     

    In the early stages of writing, I toyed with the idea of working in more of a plot involving the AUs, but it simply bored me; I didn't want to write a story about AUs in a Star Trek sort of way.  The AU is really an opportunity to put Snape & Harry in a difficult situation and force them to interact.  So I focused on what I wanted: writing pages and pages of dialogue between them. 

     

    And no apology needed…just keep reading & letting me know what you think!

     Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 09 Jan 2008 12:03 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    "The moment was always brief, and he had hoped that his son had never noticed. But this new Harry had seen it straight away, and he realized he'd been fooling himself. Of course his son could see when his own mother gazed on him like he was a stranger. How could he not? He ached at the thought that his little one had lived with this pain his whole life and never told him. "

    Now that's sad! And Lily must be almost like salt in a wound for this Severus, as much as he loves her.

    Author's Response:

    Well, you live with your choices.  Literally, in his case. 

     

    Thank you so much for continuing to post your reactions! 

Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 08 Jan 2008 10:31 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 08 Jan 2008 10:25 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! I LOVE both Snapes, but Other Snape makes me want to cry for him while Our Snape seems to be making me laugh recently. Hopefully Our Snape won't become sad too, or I'll have an emotional breakdown over two Snapes being sad. Wow, that was a bit confusing, lol. I LOVE this story, it's an excellant plot, very origanal, you have great ideas and the story is very emotional, but humor comes it to ease some of the sadness away. Beautiful work!

    PLEASE post again soon!

    Beth

    Author's Response:

    Well, I don't want you to have an emotional breakdown!  How about if Snape gets too sad, I send him over to your place for hugs?  :) 

     

    I'm happy you're enjoying it!

     
Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 08 Jan 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really neat story. I love how it's coming along. Finding Lily like this is endearing but tragic. The times where the Harry who's loved interacts with the Snape who hates are my favorites. I'm having a great time reading all of the interactions, though.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  It's over 1/4 done now…I'll be sad when it's over.  It's been so great seeing everyone's reactions!
Title: Chapter 7: Against the Other Wall 08 Jan 2008 6:56 pm
Reviewer: X5-494 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story idea. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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